Nice, I like the idea and I am going to follow this. Make more, please.

I look forward to reading this... :D

Well so far the premise is nothing new. You also should increase the length of your chapters, and not rush the scenes. I'll be keeping my eye out on this.

One thing I've got to point out for future reference, is to not have your character as too one dimensional. It seems he's going to be attacked by Rainbow Dash. While he may not want to antagonize the ponies since he is the alien in their world, there has to be a point where his patience will run low. Cultural confusions, differences in opinions, constant awkward situations, insults (intended or not), general misunderstandings could all bring about a fresh perspective and flesh out his character and prevent it from being too bland. After all what is a story without conflict?

As you're writing, you should try and avoid what I call the "Barney and Friends Syndrome", where the main character constantly is submissive and accepts whatever happens to him and instantly forgives any wrongdoings done to him, which is then completely forgotten about. Human nature and logic would dictate that these misdeeds done to him would remain with him, and colour his future actions, perceptions and opinions. To simply forget would risk it happening again, and the cycle continues.

Luke and Dan went there separate ways

their

Luke would always pick up up 5 daffodils

extra up, you should also write out the word five

This story..... I like it

2546463 always forget, never forgive. leaving yourself angry and confused

2546463 ...That was beautiful...

2546463 You sir are a smart man. Or woman. I don't know.