Sometime soon I have yet to decide when that's going to be i'm planning to make a sequel story called Adventures in Pony Pet World were Amy, Bender, Fry, Hermes, Leela, The Professor and Zoidberg actually go to Pony Pet World and hang out with characters from both My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and Littlest Pet Shop anyway that's all for now so until next time bye.
Another thing, this story only very loosely fits on this site. It is mainly Futurama, with Fry as a brony. Also I started chapter three and I'm still not seeing plot. If you want plot ideas for ywhatyou could do with this I'd be willing to help.
"Boooooooo!" Everyone booded
Dr. Zoidberg: "Your story is bad and you should feel bad!"
Leela: "Yea! For onec Zoidberg is right!"
Amy: "Yea!"
Fry: "Yea!"
Dr. Zoidberg: "Yay! People are agreeing with me!"
Hermes: "Yea mon! Lets go home. There's a manwich waitting for me."
Bender: "Hey dbzponyninja bite shiny my metal ass ahahahaha. I'll write my own fanfic with blackjacks and hookers you know what forget the blackjack!"
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Professor: (snore) "Huh? Wha? Where did everyone go? Aww to hell with it I'm going back to sleep!" (snore)
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See now that's in character. Why am I feeling so nice today, I almost said that seemed a little mean. But that's how to get through to people.
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All of you are forgetting that while this story is primarily both Futurama and My Little Pony related it's also Littlest Pet Shop related why is noone talking about the Littlest Pet Shop part of the story?
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Because this is a My Little Pony site and we are more focused on the lack of pony and for those of us that know Futurama, how the characters are not act like themselves.
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5 chapters, roughly 1500 total...
The hell mate, it's even a fail from there.
Just a few pointers,
1. I would search for a proofreader or editor for your writing.
2. Reading some guides on plot/characterization/setting would be very useful.*
3. Try to pull out more words, such tiny chapters gives readers no time to be invested in... well anything. 1000 words would be a great place to start.
4. Three different universes in one is never a good idea, too many characters, not enough time given to a single world and it is just confusing.
And 5. Watch a bit more Futurama, write down their traits/common quotes and then take another crack. Only way to go is up, that's what learning is after all.
*Plenty of guides both on Fimfiction and the great world of the internet.
WOW JUST WOW
While I'm not saying this is a bad story, I have one complaint: You kinda molested Bender's catchphrase.