I've gone through S&R, and I'm pretty proud of what I've got here. There minor edits all over the place, but some parts have undergone some narrative changes.

Chapter 5 changes:
- Some tweaks of Gareth's dialogue when he met Gleaming Horizon.
- Some tweaks of Celestia's dialogue at breakfast.

Chapter 9 Changes:

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So, here's what's going down.

Before I publish the next chapter, I'm going to be going over S&R from top to bottom, editing the whole damn thing. I've already gone through chapters 1, 2, 3 and 4.

Why? Because I'm a perfectionist arse and also it'll make the ending better if I write it with everything fresh in my mind. Hopefully.

In any case, I intend to finish S&R by the end of May, 2015. Of course, now that I've jinxed it, that probally won't happen, but that's the intent.

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Keeping this one short. I'm looking for someone who's up for giving me a hand in beta'ing what's left of The Sun & the Rose. The story is nearly done, and my grammar specialist has currently stepped down. I'm sure that anyone who has read any of my stuff out the box will realise that it's... not as carefully proof-read as it could be.

I use Google drive and will be passing out links to interested parties before the chapter goes up. Other than that, back to work for me.

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G'day guys,

An update to you all of what I'm doing right now. There's a lot to go on, so lets dive in!

Story: 'Sun & Rose'
The bare-bones outline for the next chapter has been finished, I just need to type it all up. It'll be about 3000 words in length, as before. However, S&R is on the backburner for now. There's one other project that I want to get out the way first. Once that's done, I'll be free to focus my efforts back on it.

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Good internet day to you all,

My name is soulpillar. I'm the guy that's been writing the story that you've been reading for the past few months now. Now, I've just done something that has completely slipped my mind to do for quite a while now; actually read my own story. I've read it from front to back, saw what I enjoyed and saw what I didn't. [I've also done some minor edits here and there, nothing major. Yet.]

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