A Couple Changes · 1:40am Mar 14th, 2016
Alright, I keep looking back at chapter nine and thinking, 'I can do better than this. I SHOULD have done better than this. I'm glad a lot of you like it, but I shouldn't have rushed to post it like I did. I told Cyberfire I was going to spend a couple days going over it, and then I promptly ignored my promise and posted it anyways.