My story actually already has a comment, but it’s just one and it’s not a lot to go off of. So anyone is welcome to read the story and leave me some constructive criticism in the comments.

TShining Armour Dies (and Goes to Hell)

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy

It’s exactly what it says in the title. Shining Armour dies in this story (and goes to Hell). Shenanigans ensue.

• Violence
• Death
• OC
• Shining Armor
• Flurry Heart

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