I’ve decided to continue this story, so I want some feedback on how it’s going so far keep in mind that this story was written when my writing was still really confusing and didn’t make much sense.

Please try and be nice with your comments.

For those of you who don’t know, this is a story that’s loosely based on the X-Men, but doesn’t have the crossover tag.

EThree Years Later

• Equestria Girls
• Adventure
• Sad
• Slice of Life

Three years after Paul's death life has gone back to normal, 2 new residents have arrived at the group home.

• Alt. Universe
• OC
• Main 7 (EqG)

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