Hiya, lovely peeps!

Feedback requested, obviously. So yesterday, I published this story, My Dearest Twilight. Got Featured the same day, but that doesn’t say a whole lot about how well I’ve written. If you please, could ya’ll maybe take a look at it and tell me what you think? This is my first romance, my first letter-format, my first story set in Equestria and my first story about Night and Velvet. I’ve broken a lot of my own personal boundaries and I need to know how well I’ve done that.

Thanks!

EMy Dearest Twilight

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Slice of Life

Twilight, I know we’ve been good friends for a long time now. Perhaps now might be the time to ask you out on a date? I love you so much. Yours, Nighty.

• Twilight Velvet
• Night Light

Uz Naimat · 1.3k words  ·  34  0 · 427 views

(Oh, but please comment on the story itself and not in this forum thread.)