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Hmmm...

What-If: The Basilisk ate Adagio's hair

The basilisk chased after Harry Potter, until Scootaloo lets out a clucking sound that stopped the snake in its track.

"Bawk bawk bawk bawk baw-kaw! Bawk bawk ba-kack!" Scootaloo clucked, irritating the snack, shaking its head.

Scootaloo continued to cluck, until she was standing behind Adagio.

"Bawk bawk bawk bawk baw kaw! Bawk bawk baw kaw!" Scootaloo clucked, followed by a loud, "COCK-A-DOODLE DOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!"

The blind Basilisk finally had enough of the annoying pegasus filly. Meanwhile, Adagio quickly catches on what Scootaloo was up to, when she sees the snake rearing its head back, and readies itself for lunge.

"Wait! No, no! NO!" Adagio waved her hands desperately, but it was too late.

The snake lunged forward and snapped its jaws at Adagio, who ducked her head down to avoid the bite. Unfortunately, the same cannot be said for her hair, which the snake had snapped the whole chunk of it off.

"AAAAAAHHH!!! My hair!" Adagio whimpered, watching the basilisk chewing on her hair, before it spits it out in disgust.

"Ew!" Both heroes and villains cringed in disgust.

"I've heard about hairball, but that's just wrong..." Aria clutched her stomach.

"MY HAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIRRRRRR!!!" Adagio wailed, as she went over to mourn the wet remnants of her hair. "My beautiful hair! Why?"

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Reader's discretion is advised: The scene is based on the battle between Lucifer and Adam from Hazbin Hotel. It's meant as a humorous intention for Sonata to get her sisters' "goats." (Whatever that means...)

Sonata roasting her sisters

"Wow, sisters!" Sonata laughed as she dodges Adagio and Aria's lightsaber attacks. "I have to say, I really like the new looks! It suits you!"

"Oh? You..judging US?!" Aria snarled. "YOU! Sonata. Are the most annoying and by far hated siren we've ever had the misfortune to be born with!"

"Ha! Shows what you know," Sonata smirked. "Because back home, I've got two bronies who are crazy about me! So score 2 more for me than any of you ever getting a dude! Bow chicka-wow-wow!"

And by two bronies, of course, I'm referring to HunterBrony (before he met Clarissa), and Arctic.

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HEY! We forgot about Mothman!

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Ha! This would be funny too see :rainbowlaugh:


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And THIS would be even better too see :rainbowlaugh:

I laughed so hard when Lucifer roasted Adam like that, so hearing Sonata doing the roast would be priceless

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We never forgot the Mothman. We just haven't decided how to use him for the series additionally.

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That's gotta hurt for her....and I like it!

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The Final Battle | Sunset Shimmer overcomes the Dark One’s spirit

“Do you truly believe that we would leave any rooms for errors of defeats?” The Dark One scowled, before the work their magic.

Without warning, Sunset Shimmer felt a sudden surge in her body. It almost felt as if something, or someone was trying to pry her whole body open, trying to get in.

“What’s…HAPPENING…to me?!” Sunset groaned, feeling a wave of something sharp and chilling taking hold of her. “Get…out…of…me!”

“Ha ha ha ha ha,” The Dark One cackled. “Even after all this time, in spite of so many trainings, rebuilding yourself from Sith to Jedi, you are still just a scared little girl. How the mighty has fallen.”

“I may have lost my hair,” Adagio scowled angrily. “But at least we can save face, watching you suffer!”

“Sunset!” The CMCs cried out.

“Sunset!” The Student Six followed.

“Sunset!” Sonata shouted tearfully.

“Sunset!” Spike and Storm added.

“Professor…” Harry groaned.

“Just a scared little girl,” The Dark One continued. “Pretending to be something she is not. All in false hope of regaining the favors of her friends. Her family. But most of all…the father she never got to say goodbye.”

At the Dark One’s words, Sunset’s mind was quickly flooded with flashbacks of her earliest memories, from when she was a little filly. How beautiful her world was, when she still had her father, only for it to be taken away. And from then, her memories became bleak. Riddled with nightmares of when she became a Demon Sorceress, a Sith, being trapped in a time loop, the horror of her friends losing their memories of her, and the tortures she endured at the hands of Emperor Palpatine.

“AAAAAHHHH!!!” Sunset sobbed, feeling her wounds opening up.

Once again, she’s being put on the spot, similar to when she was a prisoner of the Galaxy. She could feel the darkness to reclaim her again. She knew better than to give in, but the darkness continued to try and pry into her.

“Don’t resist, little girl,” The Dark One smirked. “It only makes the pain hurt more…”

“Give into the Dark Side, Master!” Demetria tried to goad Sunset. “It’s the only way you’ll survive!”

“Give in!” The other villains pressured Sunset. “GIVE IN!”

“Give into the Dark Side of the Force,” A a hallucination of Emperor Palpatine cackled.

“Release your anger,” Added a hallucination of Darth Vader.

“No!” Sunset panted heavily, struggling to resist. “Not again! Never again! NEVER!”

“Sunset,” Called the soothing voice of a man.

“Dad?!”

Sunset sprained to listen, searching the darkness for what sounded like her father.

“Sunset. There’s no need to continue. Just let it happen. Join me, sweetie. I’ve missed my Little Phoenix for so long.”

“Dad…no…”

“So weak. So vulnerable. How…mortal…

“Sunset…” Storm Shield gently coaxed the fiery Jedi. “Listen to me, Sunset. Listen to me. It’s not about how you are alike. It’s how you are not.”

“Sunset…I’m sorry!” Sonata sobbed in hiccups. “So…sorry…”

“Sunset,” Spike added. “You are our friend.”

“You would never hurt us,” Silverstream added.

“Yona knew Sunset is good teacher!” Yona added. “Better even than Lockhart!”

“And you’ve been protecting us,” Gallus added. “We never asked, but you protected us still!”

“You’ve been there for us, when we needed you,” Sandbar added. “We need you! Everyone needs you!”

They were right, and Sunset knew it. She believes in them. Soon enough, Sunset Shimmer’s nightmares begin to devolve into flashbacks of happier memories.

She remembers how Twilight and the Rainbooms accepted and befriended her on the spot, after she was defeated and was exorcised from her inner demon.

And from then on, her memories were the ones she cherish the most. They remind her of who she really is, what she stood for, and how she’s willing to give her life to protect everyone, in the name of friendship, Equestria, and most of all, her father.

“They’re right!” Sunset frowned, gritting her teeth with determination. “They’re my friends! I’m their friends! And I will never abandon them! Never again!”

“What…What is this?!” The Dark One exclaimed in outrage, feeling Sunset resisting its hold on her.

“Get out of me!” Sunset demanded.

“That’s it, Sunset! You can do it!” Storm Shield continued to coax.

“Get out of me!” Sunset continued, finding the courage and the strength to resist.

Soon, she began to hearing voices from everywhere, coaxing and comforting her to resist the darkness.

Postwar: Don't give in Sunset!! You're more than just a Jedi, You're a guardian of Harmony, the Element of Empathy, the one who understands what others have been through!! Be what others were before you!! Be the single spark of courage, that ignite the beacons of Hope!!

Arctic: Keep fighting Sunset! Always remember, we’re here with you! Not just us, but all your friends! We believe in you!

Plymouth: You are who you choose to be! It's never going to be easy, and that's okay! Being the best you is a task, but you aren't alone! I believe in you, Sunset! You can do it!

Cortez:Remember, Sunset! You're better than this. You may have done huge mistakes in the past, but you will always been a good being even if you were blinded by your own selfish ambitions. Fight it!

“You can do it, Sunset!” Storm Shield coaxed. “Remember! A warrior’s greatest strength is their inner strength!”

“I know…” Sunset replied to the Jedi Grandmaster. “My father…WOULD NEVER TELL ME TO GIVE UP!”

”WHAT’S HAPPENING?!!!” The Dark One exclaimed in outrage, as Sunset successfully repels the darkness out of her.

Postwar: Sunset. The Force and the power of Harmony will be with you. Always.

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“GET OUT OF MEEEEEEEE!!!!” Sunset screamed.

“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!” The Dark One screamed, feeling a part of its spirit was ripped away.

Storm Shield looked up and sees the mangled piece of the Dark One’s spirit as it attempts to retreat within the Chamber of Secrets.

“YOU WILL NOT ESCAPE!” Storm Shield shouted as he worked his magic to capture the spirit, within his own body.

“It can’t be!” Darth Andromedis shouted. “How could she have resisted?!”

“I’ll tell you how,” Sunset smirked, as she dusted herself. “I’ve learned my lessons. And I have friends who kept me grounded.”

“And we’ll always be here to have your back, Sunset!” Spike smiled, as he puts his claws on her shoulder.

“For realsies!” Sonata added.

Sunset looked over to see Harry Potter smiling at her with renewed fascination.

“Thank you, professor!” Harry bowed respectfully to her.

Tom Riddle, however, was unfazed.

“Hehe,” He chuckled sadistically. “You may have resisted the Dark One, Sunset. For that, I applaud to you. But you are too late. The process is nearly complete. In a few seconds, Ginny Weasley will be dead, and I will cease to be a memory.”

The heroes gasped as they turn their attention to the unconscious girl, and gathered around her, with the villains looking on.

Tom Riddle looked at his own hand, seeing how he was starting to become real.

“Lord Voldemort will return…very much alive!” He said.

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And last, but not least, Drama

If there’s still time left before the next chapter comes, here’s the scene for the CA’s adaption, with the inclusion of our MLP characters.

I’ve taken the creative liberty of combining most of everyone’s pitches, as well as my own to the best of my ability, for the scene below.

Mudblood and Murmurs

After the pixie disaster in the DADA class, Harry and Smolder later met up with Oliver Wood and the Gryffindor Quidditch Team.

Everyone were walking down the corridor, wearing their Quidditch outfit. Accompanying them was Sunset Shimmer.

“I spent the summer devising a whole new Quidditch program,” Oliver Wood explained. “We are going to train earlier, harder, and longer.”

“And as Assistant Professor of the Defense the Dark Arts, it’ll be my job to make sure nobody’s brooms are being jinxed…” Sunset Shimmer stated her reason for being there.

“We don’t want a repeat of what happened last year, Harry.”

“I appreciate it, Professor,” Harry expressed his gratitude.

Smolder looked ahead, and her expression immediately became a scowl.

“Uh oh. Trouble…” Smolder frowned, which caught Oliver’s attention.

“What...? I don't believe it,” Oliver scowled, in outrage.

Upon stepping out into the courtyard, the Quidditch team also came face-to-face with their most hated opponents, the Slytherin Quidditch team.

Oliver directed his attention to the team's captain, Marcus Flint.

“Where do you think you're going, Flint?” Oliver asked.

“Quidditch practice,” Marcus answered bluntly.

“I booked the pitch for Gryffindor today,” Oliver argued.

“Easy, Wood. I've got a note,” With that, Marcus holds out a rolled up scroll, which Wood takes it and opens it to read.

Ron, Hermione, along with the rest of the Student Six were also in the courtyard at the same time. And they could already tell that something bad was about to go down.

“Uh-oh. I smell trouble,” Ron said.

"And make that double!" Gallus agreed. "Come on, Guys. Let's go check out on what's going on there."

With that, the Student Six, and friends got up and walk towards the two teams.

Back with the team, Oliver was reading the contents of the scroll which says:

“I, Professor Severus Snape, do hereby give the Slytherin team permission to practice today, owing to the need to train their new Seeker."

“You’ve got a new Seeker, who?” Oliver asked.

Answering his question, Marcus steps aside, to reveal none other than Draco Malfoy himself, who steps out towards the Gryffindor team members, with a smug grin. Following closely behind him, like a dog on a leash, was Whisper Dream.

“Malfoy?!” Harry exclaimed.

"You're the new Seeker, Dumb Blonde?" Smolder followed.

“That's right,” Draco smirked as he boasted, “And that's not all that's new this year.”

Harry, Sunset Shimmer, and friends, and the rest of the Gryffindor Quidditch team examine the brooms Draco and the rest of the Slytherin team are holding. And they all share their shock.

"No way!" Ocellus exclaimed. "Are those what I think they are?"

“Those are Nimbus 2001s!” Ron exclaimed.” How did you get those?”

“A gift from Draco's father,” Marcus Flint answered, before he took notice the rest of the Student Six. “Come to admire our new gifts, freaks?”

“Well, if it isn't Captain Buckteeth and his traveling circus!” Gallus scoffed at Flint, who scowled.

“You see, Weasley, unlike some, my father can afford the best,” Malfoy boasted.

“Big talk…mouthful,” Gallus scoffed.

“Why don’t you put your daddy’s money where your mouth is?” Silverstream frowned.

“You want to say that again?” Malfoy threatened. “I’m sure my father would love to hear it.”

“Hey, hey! Whoa! Easy!” Sunset said, getting in between the two. “Save all this trash talk later, for Quidditch! We’re all here to practice, okay? So let’s just be civilized.”

“Big talk, for a washed-up Sith,” Draco sneered.

“Hey! Mind your manners, kid!” Sunset frowned. “I’m an adult here!”

“Whatever, Seraphina. At least I’ll be the one beating Potter when I catch the Snitch.”

Sunset Shimmer was gritting her teeth, and clenching her fist to resist the urge to pummel this little brat. He was clearly testing her patience. No doubt, a ploy from his father to getting her fired, if not, arrested.

“At least no one on the Gryffindor team had to buy their way in,” Hermione spoke up. “They got in on pure talent.”

“Yeah!” The Student Six all shared their agreements, with Sunset nodding in agreement.

“Exactly,” Sunset smiled proudly to Hermione, whispering, “10 points for standing up for your friend.”

Draco glared at Hermione in annoyance as he takes a few steps and stops only at arms length in front of her.

“No one asked your opinion, you filthy little Mudblood!” Draco spatted.

Sunset Shimmer, the entire Gryffindor team, Whisper Dream, and the Student Six all gasped in shock, with Hermione hurt from the offensive remark.

Silverstream immediately got in Draco's face, "What in the name of Celestia did you say to Hermione, you big bully?!"

“Yona smash Malfoy's broom!” Yona finally said in outrage, taking Malfoy’s broomstick and snapping it in half, before throwing it back at the boy.

“My father will hear about this!” Draco pointed at Yona.

“Whats the matter blondie?” Yona spatted. “Not man enough without daddy?”

Outrage at the yak’s remark, Draco immediately whipped his wand out, intending on hexing an unfriendly spell at Yona, who immediately pulls out her own wand — thanks to the special glove that Hagrid had given her and Sandbar.

Both second-years were about to hex one another, until Sunset intervened.

“ENOUGH!” Sunset shouted, using the Force to keep the two kids apart.

“He started it!” Yona pointed at Draco.

"She broke my broom!" Draco spatted.

"Mouthful called Hermione a Mudblood!"

"I know, Yona," Sunset replied, turning to Draco. “That was uncalled for, Malfoy! Apologize to Hermione now!”

“Why should I?” Draco stubbornly asked. “Her hairy cow attacked me and broke my broom!”

“I’m sure it can be repaired,” Sunset rolled her eyes. “But what you said to Hermione was uncivilized! Apologize now!”

“Never!” Draco huffed. “Besides, what would a Sith, like you know about being civil? Father told me better than to listen to a barbarian like you.”

“You'll pay for that, Malfoy!” Ron said as he takes out his wand and aims it at Draco. “Eat slugs!”

With that, Ron attempted to fire a spell. Unfortunately, it backfires, blasting him off backwards and onto the ground. Harry and friends immediately rush to his side. Meanwhile, the Slytherin were all sharing a laugh at Ron’s expense.

“You okay, Ron?” Hermione asked. “Say something!”

Ron wobbled as he got on his knees and hands. He tried to say something, only to end up puking a slug.

“Ugh!” Smolder cringed in disgust.

“YUCK!” Some of the Gryffindor teammates groaned.

“Nasty!” Sandbar stuck his tongue out.

At that moment, Gryffindor first-year, Colin Creevey came out and snapped a photo of the scene.

“Wow!” Colin asked excitedly. “Can you turn him around, Harry?”

“No, Colin! Get out of the way,” Harry replied as he and Hermione help Ron to his feet.

“Professor, can you make it stop?” Harry asked.

“Uh…let’s see,” Sunset examined, nearly getting hit with a slug from Ron. “Okay, that’s gross. I’ve been studying some counters for jinxes, hexes, and curse. But nothing yet on what to do about slugs…”

“Let's take him to Hagrid, then,” Ocellus suggested, as Ron regurgitates another slug. “He'll know what to do.”

“Okay,” Sunset turned to the Quidditch teams. “Everyone! Proceed with what you’ve got planned for today! I’m going to take Ron and friends to see Hagrid! Just, do what you got to do for today! But please, no foul play! And I mean it, Slytherin!”

With that, Sunset took her leave with Harry and friends. However, Smolder was the last one to leave as she turned to a laughing Marcus Flint and Malfoy.

“What do you want now, freak?” Flint asked Smolder, who responding by blowing a whistle with her two fingers.

Answering the call, an even bigger dragon swooped down from the sky, landed in the courtyard, and let out a loud bloodcurdling roar that scared the Slytherin team out of their Quidditch uniforms.

“Good girl, Norberta,” Smolder scratched her adopted daughter.

In the corner of the courtyard, Whisper Dream was giggling to herself at the funny sight.


Later, at Hagrid's house, Hagrid walks up to Ron with a bucket as Harry and Hermione sit on either side of him, with their friends looking on.

“This calls for a specialist’s equipment,” Hagrid said, as he gives Ron the bucket to puke in. “Nothing to do but wait till it stops, I'm afraid. Better out than in.”

“That’s what Shrek says!” Silverstream chirped.

“Who?”

“He’s an ogre!” Silverstream explained. “A friendly ogre. A friendly, but grumpy ogre. But he’s still a friend of ours!”

“I see,” Hagrid nodded in acknowledgment. “Who was Ron trying to curse, anyway?”

“Malfoy,” Harry answered. “He called Professor Sunset and Hermione...”

Harry’s words faltered when he turned to the two hurt girls, unsure if he should say it aloud, seeing how hurt they are.

"That Spoiled Bratty Rich Dumb Blonde Jerk called Professor Sunset a Sith," Smolder spoke up. "And then he said something to Hermione... Well, We all don't know exactly what it means anyway."

"It was something very offensive that started with the Letter "M,"' Sandbar described.

Hermione looked down at the floor, before she turned to Sunset, who beckoned her to say her piece.

“Go ahead, Hermione,” Sunset encouraged, prioritizing her student’s conflict before her own.

Hermione gets up and folds her arms as she walks away from her friends.

“He called me a Mudblood,” Hermione said, much to Hagrid’s shock.

“He did not!” Hagrid exclaimed.

“It’s true,” Sunset nodded.

“Yeah! He said it alright,” Gallus spoke.

“But Yona smashed Mouthful’s broom!” Yona added. “Teacher Sunset tried to get Malfoy to apologize, for calling Hermione a Mudblood. But he didn’t and he called Sunset a Sith!”

“What's a Sith?” Harry asked. “And what’s a Mudblood?”

Hermione spun around, revealing her watery eyes, as she explained, “It means "dirty blood". Mudblood's a really foul name for someone who is muggle-born, someone with non-magic parents, someone like me. It's not a term one usually hears in civilized conversation.”

“See, the thing is, Harry,” Hagrid lectured. “There's some wizards, like the Malfoy family, who think they're better than everyone else, because they're what people call pure-blood.”

“That's horrible!” Harry gasped, as Ron coughs up another slug.

“It's disgusting,” Ron groaned in agreement.

“And…what about you professor?” Harry asked Sunset. “Why does Malfoy called you a Sith?”

“Because…I was…a Sith,” Sunset Shimmer frowned sadly. “Long-story short, a Sith is the exact opposite of a…of a Jedi, like Storm Shield is. A Sith is…in a way, like…Voldemort.”

“What?” Harry gasped in shock. “But…how? And why?”

Sunset Shimmer fell silent as she looked to the side, clearly uncomfortable about bringing up her past.

“I think we shouldn’t pry too much from her, for now, Harry,” Sandbar advised to the Boy Who Lived.

“I’m just glad dad wasn’t there to see me…like that…” Sunset sighed.

At the mention of her father, everyone all noticed Sunset Shimmer's depression taking an even deeper dive for the worst than before. Clearly, something about her father is hurting the fiery girl even more.

“Be that as it may,” Hagrid began. “It’s codswallop to boot. Dirty blood or Sith... Why, there isn't a wizard alive today that's not half-blood or less. More to the point, they've yet to think of a spell that our Hermione can't do.”

Hagrid’s comforting words work their magic as a small smile starting to form on Hermione’s face.

“Come here,” Hagrid held a gentle hand out, beckoning for her to walk to him, gently stroking her hand in comfort.

“Don't you think on it, Hermione,” Hagrid encouraged, while also addressing to Sunset. “Don't either of you think on it for one minute. Hey?”

Despite the tears in her eyes, Hermione smiled as both she and Sunset nodded to the gentle giant’s words. Soon, the rest of the friends present all joined in giving Hermione their words of encouragements.

"Yeah 'Mione, you're smarter than all of us in here," Gallus said. "It's like you're A Twilight Sparkle 2.0."

"Come on, Hermione!" Silverstream joined. "Wipe those tears out of your face. Don't let those Pure-Blood jerks bring you down in an instant, because you know that you are Better and Smarter than them

“Hey Hagrid!” A voice chirped, as his doors opened up and a familiar siren stepped in, carrying a basket in hand. “I brought you lunch!”

“Ah, thank ya, Sonata!” Hagrid smiled to the reformed Siren.

“Sonata?!” Sunset Shimmer and the Student Six exclaimed in surprise.

“Oh! Hey guys!” Sonata smiled, waving her hand. “Didn’t expect to see you here. Mr. Hagrid, warn me next time! I would’ve made more tacos if you told me you’ll be having guests over.”

“Oh, they’re just ‘ere because of an emergency,” Hagrid replied gently to the siren. “One of their friend is under the weather you see.”

Ron puked up another slug, which Sonata immediately notices.

“Ew!” Sonata cringed. “I see what you mean.”

“Hold on,” Harry spoke up, turning to the Student Six, while gesturing to Sonata. “You know this girl?”

“You could say that,” Gallus replied.

“Hey, Sonata!” Silverstream happily greeted. “Watch ya doing here? I thought you were working at Twilight’s castle as the head chef!”

“I am!” Sonata replied. “I mean, I was. But when the new year at Hogwarts started, I thought that maybe I could help out some more at school. So after Twilight puts in a good word for me with Professor Dumbledore, he put me straight to work with Hagrid!”

“Sonata’s been a big help with tending to the grounds of Hogwarts,” Hagrid smiled. “Talented little lass, she is. A seriously misunderstood creature, for a young siren, her age. Truth is, she’s got the optimism and a beauty to match.”

“Aw, shucks!” Sonata blushed.

“A siren?” Harry asked.

“Oh yeah, seriously misunderstood creatures,” Gallus began in sarcasm. “Until you meet her sisters.”

“Disowned sisters,” Sandbar reminded.

“What happened?” Harry asked.

“We’ll tell you later,” Silverstream answered to Harry.

“Sonata,” Sunset spoke up, making herself known to the siren, and former Inquisitor — the Fifth Sister. “I’ll be darn.”

“Oh! Hi Sunset,” Sonata greeted awkwardly, stuttering on her words.

“I-I-uh. Listen. I’ve been wanting to say how sorry I was for the… the way, my sis-my disowned sisters and I had treated you, when we were working f-for the Empire. I…I didn’t like it. I didn’t want to…to do all that horrible things we did to you. But I…I didn’t want to say anything to upset my sisters. I was a…I was a…I was a fool. And you have every right to…to have your revenge on me.”

Sans the Student Six and Hagrid, Harry, Ron, and Hermione looked at Sonata with piqued interest. What could someone like Sonata have possibly done to someone like Sunset Shimmer in the past?

Everyone turned to Sunset, waiting for her response.

Sunset Shimmer simply looked at the reformed siren for a moment, while taking her apology into consideration. The Jedi Sorceress was still finding it hard to believe that standing before her was one of her former enemies, who also played a part in her kidnap and torture.

Nevertheless, after witnessing her sisters abandoning Sonata, in Arkham Asylum, through Discord’s Theater in the Galaxy, Sunset finally shook her head with a smile.

“I’m done with revenge, Sonata,” Sunset smiled. “I forgive you. And…to be fair, I know what it’s like to be a fool from…personal experience.”

Sonata smiled, relieved to have finally gotten the guilt off her conscience.

“Anyway…I’ve brought some tacos and…a few breads, and some apples, and some treats from Hogsmeade!” Sonata presented to Hagrid and friends.

“Oh! And I even got Fang’s favorite doggy treats too!”

“Ah, thank ya, Sonata!” Hagrid smiled, taking jelly slug, offering it to his guests. “Jelly slug anyone?”

Ron immediately puked another slug, and shook his head, “Pass…”

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thanks for taking my suggestion! However, maybe, MAYBE, Malfoy or another Slytherin might try to attack Yona immediately afterward. BUT, its your choice.

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Exactly job, Phantom! Amazing as always!

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However, maybe, MAYBE, Malfoy or another Slytherin might try to attack Yona immediately afterward. BUT, its your choice.

Nah. It’s your idea, my friend. The choice shouldn’t be mine. I’m just combining everybody’s ideas together into one package the best I can.

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But, since you brought it up…

However, maybe, MAYBE, Malfoy or another Slytherin might try to attack Yona immediately afterward.

Like this?

“Oh no you didn’t!” Yona finally said in outrage, taking Malfoy’s broomstick and snapping it in half, before throwing it back at the boy.

Outrage at the yak’s action, Draco immediately whipped his wand out, intending on hexing an unfriendly spell at Yona, who immediately pulls out her own wand — thanks to the special glove that Hagrid had given her and Sandbar.

Both second-years were about to hex one another, until Sunset intervened.

“ENOUGH!” Sunset shouted, using the Force to keep the two kids apart.

“He started it!” Yona pointed at Draco.

“My father will hear about this!” Draco pointed at Yona.

“Whats the matter blondie?” Yona spatted. “Not man enough without daddy?”

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Although I thought it would happen after the blondie remark, as Draco felt his manhood was insulted.

Oh. Now you tell me.

“Oh no you didn’t!” Yona finally said in outrage, taking Malfoy’s broomstick and snapping it in half, before throwing it back at the boy.

“My father will hear about this!” Draco pointed at Yona.

“Whats the matter blondie?” Yona spatted. “Not man enough without daddy?”

Outrage at the yak’s remark, Draco immediately whipped his wand out, intending on hexing an unfriendly spell at Yona, who immediately pulls out her own wand — thanks to the special glove that Hagrid had given her and Sandbar.

Both second-years were about to hex one another, until Sunset intervened.

“ENOUGH!” Sunset shouted, using the Force to keep the two kids apart.

“He started it!” Yona pointed at Draco.

"She broke my broom!" Draco spatted.

"Mouthful called Hermione a Mudblood!"

"I know, Yona," Sunset replied, turning to Draco. “That was uncalled for, Malfoy! Apologize to Hermione now!”

Better now?

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Mario, I don’t like the term ‘perfect’. It’s too stressful. Whatever we use will be just fine.

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You’re doing fine Doc. We’ll see what we can work with.

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Not bad, Phantom. I also did some quotes of the Slug Spell and Hagrid comforting Hermione back on the Harry Potter Quote Suggestions Thread on pages 12 and 18.

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Makes you wonder what part will this guy have ever since Monsters Unleashed.

Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets

Demetria pleads Sunset

Demetria:Master Seraphina, I know you're still alive in there. Please, lose that Sunset disguise of yours and come back to us. Be my master again and with you on the Dark Order, we can end the last of the Potters and his Equestrian lackeys once and for all. All I ask for you is to come back to us. Please, Master. Join us once more, won't you?

Sunset:Darth Seraphina's gone, Demetria. Only Sunset Shimmer remains

Andromedis:Then you will suffer for your betrayal, Traitor!

Dramamaster829
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We will see what we can work with. Maybe they both can be to good use.

Phantom-Dragon
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I've added a few of them into the scene above.

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Let's see if our Quote Suggestions can make it to Lord Enigma's final draft.

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Don't jinx it...

Phantom-Dragon
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You know...

If Storm Shield is going to be in the final battle, then...

Cozy Glow tells a Yo Mama Joke at Storm Shield

Storm Shield was zapping after Cozy Glow, who hid behind a statue, before she poked her head out to crack a Yo Mama Joke.

"Yo mama so old, she sat behind Jesus in the First Grade!" Said Cozy Glow.

"OH!" Storm Shield gasped at the indignity. "You leave my mother out of this!"

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"Yo mama so old, she sat behind Jesus in the First Grade!" Said Cozy Glow.

Oh yeah Cozy, well yo mama is so fat, her shadow weighs 42 lbs.!

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I'm combining your quote suggestion to the following quote suggestion below.

Here's a little suggestion for the Chamber scene. It's something that always bugged me about the idea of Diary Tom Riddle becoming real when the real Voldemort is around.

The gang runs back to where Ginny lies on the floor. Tom Riddle grins as his ghostly form becomes less transparent.

Tom Riddle: Yes, Potter. The process is nearly complete. In a few minutes, Ginny Weasley will be dead. And I will cease to be a memory. (he watches his hand become more solid.) Lord Voldemort will return, very.... much... alive!

Smolder: Uh, you know that real Voldemort is still out there somewhere, right? And I don't think he'll like anyone trying to take his place, even if it's a younger version of himself.

Sandbar: Seriously, it'll be way too confusing and complicated! It'll be like the SpiderPony Clone Saga all over again!

Tom Riddle: Yes, the Order has told me of the fate of my current self, but that won't be a problem. He and I are as much a part of each other as we were when he bound me to the diary. We shall simply reunite. He shall have a new body, I shall have a lifetime worth of memories and power, and Lord Voldemort will be whole again.

Gallus: I hope you're ready to have a creepy snake mummy face sticking out of the back of your head, dude.

Tom Riddle: (mutters to himself.) Still, I suppose I can still use the diary again in case my future self still needs seven.

Yona: Needs seven what?
(The basilisk bursts out of the water.)

The Final Battle | Sunset Shimmer overcomes the Dark One’s spirit

“Do you truly believe that we would leave any rooms for errors of defeats?” The Dark One scowled, before the work their magic.

Without warning, Sunset Shimmer felt a sudden surge in her body. It almost felt as if something, or someone was trying to pry her whole body open, trying to get in.

“What’s…HAPPENING…to me?!” Sunset groaned, feeling a wave of something sharp and chilling taking hold of her. “Get…out…of…me!”

“Ha ha ha ha ha,” The Dark One cackled. “Even after all this time, in spite of so many trainings, rebuilding yourself from Sith to Jedi, you are still just a scared little girl. How the mighty has fallen.”

“I may have lost my hair,” Adagio scowled angrily. “But at least we can save face, watching you suffer!”

“Sunset!” The CMCs cried out.

“Sunset!” The Student Six followed.

“Sunset!” Sonata shouted tearfully.

“Sunset!” Spike and Storm added.

“Professor…” Harry groaned.

“Just a scared little girl,” The Dark One continued. “Pretending to be something she is not. All in false hope of regaining the favors of her friends. Her family. But most of all…the father she never got to say goodbye.”

At the Dark One’s words, Sunset’s mind was quickly flooded with flashbacks of her earliest memories, from when she was a little filly. How beautiful her world was, when she still had her father, only for it to be taken away. And from then, her memories became bleak. Riddled with nightmares of when she became a Demon Sorceress, a Sith, being trapped in a time loop, the horror of her friends losing their memories of her, and the tortures she endured at the hands of Emperor Palpatine.

“AAAAAHHHH!!!” Sunset sobbed, feeling her wounds opening up.

Once again, she’s being put on the spot, similar to when she was a prisoner of the Galaxy. She could feel the darkness to reclaim her again. She knew better than to give in, but the darkness continued to try and pry into her.

“Don’t resist, little girl,” The Dark One smirked. “It only makes the pain hurt more…”

“Give into the Dark Side, Master!” Demetria tried to goad Sunset. “It’s the only way you’ll survive!”

“Give in!” The other villains pressured Sunset. “GIVE IN!”

“Give into the Dark Side of the Force,” A a hallucination of Emperor Palpatine cackled.

“Release your anger,” Added a hallucination of Darth Vader.

“No!” Sunset panted heavily, struggling to resist. “Not again! Never again! NEVER!”

“Sunset,” Called the soothing voice of a man.

“Dad?!”

Sunset sprained to listen, searching the darkness for what sounded like her father.

“Sunset. There’s no need to continue. Just let it happen. Join me, sweetie. I’ve missed my Little Phoenix for so long.”

“Dad…no…”

“So weak. So vulnerable. How…mortal…

“Sunset…” Storm Shield gently coaxed the fiery Jedi. “Listen to me, Sunset. Listen to me. It’s not about how you are alike. It’s how you are not.”

“Sunset…I’m sorry!” Sonata sobbed in hiccups. “So…sorry…”

“Sunset,” Spike added. “You are our friend.”

“You would never hurt us,” Silverstream added.

“Yona knew Sunset is good teacher!” Yona added. “Better even than Lockhart!”

“And you’ve been protecting us,” Gallus added. “We never asked, but you protected us still!”

“You’ve been there for us, when we needed you,” Sandbar added. “We need you! Everyone needs you!”

They were right, and Sunset knew it. She believes in them. Soon enough, Sunset Shimmer’s nightmares begin to devolve into flashbacks of happier memories.

She remembers how Twilight and the Rainbooms accepted and befriended her on the spot, after she was defeated and was exorcised from her inner demon.

And from then on, her memories were the ones she cherish the most. They remind her of who she really is, what she stood for, and how she’s willing to give her life to protect everyone, in the name of friendship, Equestria, and most of all, her father.

“They’re right!” Sunset frowned, gritting her teeth with determination. “They’re my friends! I’m their friends! And I will never abandon them! Never again!”

“What…What is this?!” The Dark One exclaimed in outrage, feeling Sunset resisting its hold on her.

“Get out of me!” Sunset demanded.

“That’s it, Sunset! You can do it!” Storm Shield continued to coax.

“Get out of me!” Sunset continued, finding the courage and the strength to resist.

Soon, she began to hearing voices from everywhere, coaxing and comforting her to resist the darkness.

Postwar: Don't give in Sunset!! You're more than just a Jedi, You're a guardian of Harmony, the Element of Empathy, the one who understands what others have been through!! Be what others were before you!! Be the single spark of courage, that ignite the beacons of Hope!!

Arctic: Keep fighting Sunset! Always remember, we’re here with you! Not just us, but all your friends! We believe in you!

Plymouth: You are who you choose to be! It's never going to be easy, and that's okay! Being the best you is a task, but you aren't alone! I believe in you, Sunset! You can do it!

Cortez:Remember, Sunset! You're better than this. You may have done huge mistakes in the past, but you will always been a good being even if you were blinded by your own selfish ambitions. Fight it!

“You can do it, Sunset!” Storm Shield coaxed. “Remember! A warrior’s greatest strength is their inner strength!”

“I know…” Sunset replied to the Jedi Grandmaster. “My father…WOULD NEVER TELL ME TO GIVE UP!”

”WHAT’S HAPPENING?!!!” The Dark One exclaimed in outrage, as Sunset successfully repels the darkness out of her.

Postwar: Sunset. The Force and the power of Harmony will be with you. Always.

(I liked too add more here)

“GET OUT OF MEEEEEEEE!!!!” Sunset screamed.

“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!” The Dark One screamed, feeling a part of its spirit was ripped away.

Storm Shield looked up and sees the mangled piece of the Dark One’s spirit as it attempts to retreat within the Chamber of Secrets.

“YOU WILL NOT ESCAPE!” Storm Shield shouted as he worked his magic to capture the spirit, within his own body.

“It can’t be!” Darth Andromedis shouted. “How could she have resisted?!”

“I’ll tell you how,” Sunset smirked, as she dusted herself. “I’ve learned my lessons. And I have friends who kept me grounded.”

“And we’ll always be here to have your back, Sunset!” Spike smiled, as he puts his claws on her shoulder.

“For realsies!” Sonata added.

Sunset looked over to see Harry Potter smiling at her with renewed fascination.

“Thank you, professor!” Harry bowed respectfully to her.

Tom Riddle, however, was unfazed.

“Hehe,” He chuckled sadistically. “You may have resisted the Dark One, Sunset. For that, I applaud to you. But you are too late. The process is nearly complete. In a few seconds, Ginny Weasley will be dead, and I will cease to be a memory.”

The heroes gasped as they turn their attention to the unconscious girl, and gathered around her, with the villains looking on.

Tom Riddle looked at his own hand, seeing how he was starting to become real.

“Lord Voldemort will return…very much alive!” He said.


"Uh, you know that real Voldemort is still out there somewhere, right?" Smolder pointed out. "And I don't think he'll like anyone trying to take his place, even if it's a younger version of himself."

"Seriously, it'll be way too confusing and complicated!" Sandbar added. "It'll be like the SpiderPony Clone Saga all over again!"

"Yes, the Order has told me of the fate of my current self," Tom Riddle gestured, as the Benefactor and the Dark One stood behind him. "But that won't be a problem. He and I are as much a part of each other as we were when he bound me to the diary. We shall simply reunite. He shall have a new body, I shall have a lifetime worth of memories and power, and Lord Voldemort will be whole again."

"I hope you're ready to have a creepy snake mummy face sticking out of the back of your head, dude," Gallus scoffed.

"Still, I suppose I can still use the diary again in case my future self still needs seven," Tom Riddle murmured.

"Needs seven what?" Yona asked.

Suddenly, as if on cue, there was a burst of water, startling the heroes to look behind them. The basilisk has returned.

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Just joking around, Plymouth. But maybe a reminder for this scene, in the CA Future G5 theater.

"Joe Walker Dies"

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It's definitely hilarious, but what's it got to do with the G5 branch?

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Hey Mr. E.

The following you are about to see is an amazing scene that was written and pitched by Plymouth! And in the recent acknowledgement of Storm Shield's role in the Cinematic Adventure, the red texts you that are written are of Storm's dialogue.

We hope you enjoy.
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Riddle’s Defeat

The great Basilisk lay dead. Harry and Sunset stepped away from the dying husk, only to slump forward to the ground, each with a sharp fang implanted through their skin.

“Sunset!” Sonata cried, lunging forward, only to be held back by Aria’s death grip.

“Shut it!”

The rest of the captured students watched in horror as their friends each pulled out a Basilisk fang from their arms, fresh blood dripping from their wounds.

Storm Shield turned to Tom Riddle and pointed the Sword of Harmony (Excalibur) at the Dark Wizard.

"What's wrong with them?" Storm Shield demanded.

“Remarkable, isn't it?” Riddle taunted. “How quickly the venom of the Basilisk penetrates the body? If you have any final words, Potter, Shimmer, you'd best speak them now. I'd guess you both have little more than a minute to live.”

“Revenge is a dish best served cold, isn’t it?” Adagio smirked, while scratching her head. "But...I'm going to need a wig to compensate for it...".

“So ends the famous Harry Potter and the Hand of the Emperor. On their knees in the Chamber of Secrets. Defeated by the Dark Lord they so unwisely challenged. You’ll be with your Mudblood mother soon, Harry…and say hello to your father, Seraphina."

“Don’t you dare call her that!” Scootaloo snapped. “Sunset is a hero!”

“Golly, how can you call a cold-blooded killer a hero?” Cozy taunted.

“I can call you a sociopath,” Gallus sneered.

Storm Shield started to advance upon Tom Riddle, with the Sword of Harmony in hand.

"What do you think you're doing?" Tom Riddle asked, with a raised eyebrow, unflinching at the Prince's charge.

"If Sunset and Harry going to die tonight," Storm snarled. "Then so help me, Tom. You'll be going with them!"

"Ha! The Prince of Harmony, of peace, killing a memory of me?" Tom scoffed. "Hardly. I'm no Jedi, but I know that revenge is beneath you. You're becoming more like a Sith than you think. Maybe an even bigger, or more ruthless Sith Lord than Seraphina ever was. Just look at her, and the Boy Who Lived."

Tom Riddle pointed, directing Storm's attention to the two fallen heroes.

"The both of them, on death's door, because of you," Tom Riddle continued to gloat. "My basilisk may have struck the blow, but you...you are the one who killed them. And it's all for you. Everything...was all about you..."

The villains held the students down while they watched Harry and Sunset slowly die in front of them. In a few short moments, they would be dead, and their friends would slowly follow them. Harry reached over to Ginny’s cold body, then picked the black Diary that started all of this.

“Funny, isn't it?” Riddle continued. “The damage a silly little book can do? Especially in the hands of a silly little girl. I suppose it goes to show just how idiotic and vulnerable friendship really is.”

The villains all laughed at this. Sunset remained undeterred by this, instead staring the spirit dead cold in the eyes.

“That’s the thing, Riddle,” she groaned weakly. “Vulnerability is a countenance; it keeps you humble, and drives you to become the best you you can be.”

Harry brought the Diary to the forefront, opening it to a set of blank pages, much to Riddle’s confusion. “What are you doing?”

“Do it, Harry,” Sunset declared.

The boy wizard looked his friend in the eyes, and steely nodded, holding the Basilisk fang aloft. All of sudden, Riddle became immensely afraid.

“Stop! No!”

But it was too late. Harry plunged the fang straight into the pages, and immediately black ink began spurting out like blood from a stab wound. The form of Riddle suddenly stopped in his tracks, a large hole of light bursting from his stomach like he had been shot. The light filled the entire chamber cascading over the entire Order, who were all afraid of what was happening. Riddle screamed in agony, lunging for Harry who stabbed the other page. Ink once again bleeding from its contents as more and more glowing holes appeared all over Riddle, from his legs, arms, and his face.

Then, like magic, something happened to the other villains in the Chamber. Gallus, who was held by Tirek, suddenly felt his grip going slack. The giant centaur looked as if his own body was shrinking. Sonata noticed the same thing with the Sirens as Adagio stumbled, clutching her throat.

“What’s happening?!” she cried. “Why do I feel so weak?!”

That was the moment all hell broke loose.

Gallus kicked himself free of Tirek, knocking the centaur to the ground. The griffon then dove for the Seeds who held his girlfriend, while Seed’s men fired aimlessly in the confusion, their weapons spectacularly malfunctioning. Joseph dove out of the way, the guns instead firing upon Regina and Cersei’s knights. The Lannister Queen pulled Venrys in front of her like a shield as the onslaught of bullets pierced the man’s body.

Using this distraction, Spike hauled himself from Sombra, launching the shadow king towards the firing squad. In the chaos Sombra’s form crushed the men, while he barely had the strength to stand up again. The dragon then leaped forward, pulling the shadow king’s giant arm with great ferocity. Smolder likewise went nuts over the villains, smashing through their ranks with scolding fire to get to Ocellus, who then sent a volley of spells against the Dazzlings. Sonata used this to break free, strangling Aria from behind she threw her against Adagio, and finally used Zoe as a bowling ball, throwing her petite body as if she were no more than a pile of sticks, knocking all three Sirens to the ground in pain.

Yona took this opportunity to charge forward, smashing into the form of Chrysalis, winding her severely and freeing Sandbar and Scootaloo. The earth-pony butted his head against Sweeney, knocking his prized razor from his grip. Scootaloo then surged ahead, smashing into a dazed Regina, freeing the magical grip on Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle. Once that was over, the yak then charged behind the confused backs of the Siths, leaving them dazed and surprised and powerless to fight back.

“My lord!” Tirek cried. “Can’t you do something?!”

Neither of the Order answered any cries for help from their defeated members. The fact was that none of them showed any emotion whatsoever.

The Dark One immediately tried to make a run for it, escaping into a portal, only for Storm Shield to chase after them, with the Sword of Harmony.

"YOU WILL NOT ESCAPE!" Storm Shield declared, as he hurls the sword, straight at the Dark One, stabbing them in the back.

The Dark One fell the ground, before they were absorbed into the blade. A prisoner of the Sword of Harmony.

It was at this moment that Harry closed the cover of the Diary, and with one final ounce of strength left in his dying body, plunged the fang into the cover as it bled out the last of its contents. Riddle’s form could do nothing more at this point. Slowly but surely, his body became engulfed in bright white lights like burning cinders against paper, until there was nothing more to burn, and the spiritual component exploded in blinding light, leaving nothing behind but a tattered Diary bled dry of everything.

And just like that, all was silent.

After a few moments, Sunset dared to speak up. “Is…is everyone okay?”

There were a few collective groans. “Sort of,” Smolder offered. “I mean, we’re not dead. And it looks like they all ran away again. I saw them and their portals.”

"Not all of them," Storm Shield declared, holding up the Sword of Harmony, revealing the screaming face of the Dark One.

“Is everyone here?” Sunset asked.

“We’re good,” Gallus and Silverstream said.

“Yona and Sandbar alive,” Yona added.

“Here,” the CMCs spoke.

“Yes?” Ocellus meekly offered.

“I’m good over here,” Spike said. “Oh, boy. That was a whirlwind.”

“A little bruised but I’ll live,” Sonata said. Then she gasped, staggering over to Sunset with a limp in her leg. “Sunset! Y-you’re…”

“I know,” the Jedi coughed. “I know. What about Ginny?”

The Gryffindor in question gasped for life, as if waking up from drowning. The CMCs rushed forward to help the girl.

“Ginny! Thank Celestia you’re alright!” Apple Bloom smiled.

“We were so worried about you!” Sweetie Belle added.

Ginny just about broke down. “Oh, girls! I’m so sorry! It was the Diary in my cauldron! It—!”

"Whoa, whoa, whoa, hey. Take it easy, kiddo," Storm Shield coaxed the little girl.

“It’s alright! It’s alright,” Scootaloo soothed. “We destroyed the diary and the ghost that was possessing it. You don’t need to worry about it ever again.”

“But what about the Monster?”

“Harry and Sunset battled and eventually killed the beast! It was awesome!”

“H-Harry?”

She turned around and saw the boy in question, disheveled and bleeding all over the floor. She also saw Sunset in a similar position.

“Harry, it was me. But, I swear, I didn't mean to…Riddle made me. And…Harry, Sunset…you’re hurt.”

They both covered their injuries. “‘Tis but a scratch,” Sunset painfully coughed. “It’s just a flesh wound.”

Sonata looked like she was about to cry laughing. “Why’d you have to make that of all references at a time like this?”

Harry spoke up. He was evidently growing more and more weaker by the second. “Don't worry. Ginny, you need to get yourself out. Follow the Chamber, and you'll find Ron.”

“W-well what about you guys?” Ocellus asked.

“Basilisk poison works fast. We don’t have much longer.”

“But you can’t die!” Sweetie cried.

“But what can we do? I-I want to do something! I just…” Spike slumped into his knees as if to hide his pouring tears.

At that moment there was a beautiful sound of music, and down from the sky there came the distinct forms of the Phoenixes Fawkes and Philomena. The former flew down to Harry while the latter landed gracefully before Sunset.

“You were brilliant, Fawkes,” Harry said weakly. “I just wasn't quick enough.”

“I’m sorry, for everything,” Sunset sighed. “Please…give Celestia my love.”

Storm Shield, however, perked up as he realizes what the two phoenixes were about to do.

"Actually, wait a minute!" Storm Shield exclaimed. "There's still a miracle! Philomena! Fawkes! Please!"

The phoenixs gave small little grunts but nothing more. They lowered their heads over the open wounds and began crying tears over them. Each drop emitted a wisp of steam as if the wounds were sizzling pans. The others stared in amazement as little by little the open wounds disappeared into complete nothingness.

Harry lifted his arm, grinning in amazement. “Of course!” he beamed. “Phoenix tears have healing powers.”

“It’s like it was never there to begin with,” Sunset smiled. She rolled her arm around. “Wow, the poison’s gone from my bloodstream just like that.”

Storm Shield smiled and nodded, stroke Philomena and Fawke's heads in gratitude, "Good girl, Philomena. And you too, Fawkes!"

“That’s great—Ah!” Sonata cried for joy then painfully stumbled.

“Woah, woah. Hold still. Come on, lean your weight on me.” The Siren slung her arm over the Jedi’s shoulder, leaning over to adjust the weight for her gimp leg.

Harry looked at the graceful bird. “Thanks.”

Sunset looked to Celestia’s favorite bird, who had perched herself on the shoulders between herself and Sonata. The wonderful bird looked more adorable sitting down. “Thank you too, Philomena,” she smiled.

The bird gave a pleasant song, and then to the surprise of both girls, nuzzled her soft and feathered head against their faces. It was a feeling that was out of nowhere but welcomed.

“Aww! She likes you!” Silverstream beamed cutely.

“Yeah, that’s adorable,” Spike smiled.

Philomena then sang a beautiful song. It was soft and peaceful with light dancing sounds and light tones, and yet wonderfully melancholic at the same time. It touched the hearts of everyone that heard it, none more so than the two girls she had planted herself between. To them, it was a song of love of all things that lived, and that joy and happiness would always permeate despite everything that happened.

“That…that was so beautiful,” Sonata cried. “Oh, god I’m crying right now.”

“It’s okay, I’m crying too,” Sunset added.

"It's enough to make a grown stallion cry," Storm Shield smiled. "And that's okay. You can go ahead tear."

“Have you ever heard the sweet melody of a phoenix before?” Sandbar said, dreamily.

“I am so jealous that I missed out,” Gallus choked, sniffling.

“I wish I could sing like a phoenix,” Sweetie said.

Poor Ginny had been through way too much turmoil in the short span of months, not to mention returning from being comatose. Harry could see it and made a move to comfort her.

“It's all right, Ginny,” he said. “It's over. It's just a memory.”

“I know, but…what if…what if…?”

“What if you can’t stop thinking about it?” Sunset offered.

Ginny meekly nodded, and the Jedi smiled.

“I know how you feel. Believe me, I’ve been through it many times over. You can’t change the past, but you can’t stop remembering it either, and that’s not a bad thing. I realize that having terrible memories is just as important as having good memories, that way it strengthens you to become a better you.”

Storm Shield walked over and place a hand on Sunset's shoulder.

"She's right," Storm Shield looked down at Sunset and smiled warmly.

“Yeah,” Sonata nodded. “It’s like you’re rising from the ashes like a phoenix! Uh…no offense.”

Philomena simply nipped at the Siren’s ear, causing her to happily giggle. “Hey, that tickles!”

“Aww!” the CMCs declared in unison.

“Hooray! Friends all happy and not dead!” Yona smiled. “Now Yona thinks we should leave Chamber and return to professors.”

“Good idea,” Scootaloo agreed. “Come on, let’s get out of here.”

“And hopefully never return to this slimy pit of despair. Ugh!” Sweetie gagged.

“Ah’m with ya on that,” Apple Bloom agreed.

The CMCs helped Ginny up while Sunset helped Sonata along with her limp. Yona and Sandbar followed behind with Gallus and Silversteam bringing up the rear, nuzzling each other with comfort. Spike wiped his brow, cringing at the bleeding cut along his arm as he kept pace with Sunset.

Storm Shield walked over to Sunset Shimmer, giving her his compliment.

"Nice work, Jedi Master," Storm Shield bowed in respect. "You handled yourself much better in this Cinematic Adventure. When we get back, I know some friends who would love to meet you."

Sunset Shimmer smiled in return, "Thanks. But first thing's first, I need to apologize to Twilight. After she and the others are unpetrified, that is."

Ocellus noticed that Smolder had remained behind, staring down at the fresh corpses of the knights. “Smolder? What’s the matter?”

“I just…I don’t know,” the dragoness shrugged. “I guess I have a grim curiosity to see what’s under these helmets, you know?”

“Um…I-I don’t really know.”

“Yeah, I suppose. Well, here goes to hopefully not grave-robbing.”

She reached down and picked up the helmet of the nearest knight. Underneath was a shockingly young man with dirty blonde hair and a small goatee. He looked like he might have used to be a punk rockstar. Even though the strikingly handsome young face was jarring to see, it wasn’t the thing that shocked them the most.

“Ocellus,” Smolder began. “Is it just me or does this guy…look exactly like Raven and Apple White and the others? Please tell me it’s just me.”

The changeling looked like she was trying to hold back throwing up. “N-n-no…i-it’s not just you. I-I s-see it too.”

The dragon fearfully nodded. “I was afraid of that. This is…we gotta tell the professors this.”

“Yes. W-we must.”

“Okay. Let’s just…get out of here and…hopefully never come back. I’d rather not spend another minute in a place full of corpses, no matter how decomposed they look.”

“Th-that wasn’t funny, Smolder.”

“Sorry.”

A moment that should have felt like a great victory now suddenly felt like a grim anchor that held them down to the pits of sorrow. It just went to show the depths of what evils these villains were capable of, shamefully and without remorse.


Plot twist: the Dark Order used the life force of each of its members and tied them directly to Voldemort’s Horecruxes as collateral. That way, should any of them betray the Order or switch sides, their deaths would be inevitable should everything go wrong.

Also, a cameo from a random character from Ever After High I randomly picked off the internet: Sparrow Hood.

The words between Storm Shield and Tom Riddle was inspired by the Green Goblin from Spider–Man: No Way Home

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It's definitely hilarious, but what's it got to do with the G5 branch?

In case the monitor decides to "malfunction" again...

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The whole 'malfunction' ordeal has been 'a lot' to get used to. But I can deal with it... least till the end of this project.

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Ooh! I got a better one!

Storm Shield battled with Queen Chrysalis, until the changeling makes an offensive remark at one point.

“Your mother was a hamster! And your father smelled like elderberries!” She snipped.

“OH!” Storm Shield gasped at the indignity. “How dare you use Monty Python to insult my parents?!”

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“Your mother was a hamster! And your father smelled like elderberries!” She snipped.

If that's the case I shall have to say "NI!"... and maybe use a Holy Hand Grenade.

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BAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Monty Python never gets old with jokes like these.

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Well, Cozy. Yo mama's so old that when I told her to act her age, she died!

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Mr. Extreme Enigma (Darth Andromedis’s creator)

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Postwar! Your assistance is needed for Sunset’s development.

Final Battle | Darth Andromedis’s defeat

At one point, in a typical Sith fashion, Darth Andromedis decides that he’s had enough of Demetria, for her failure to destroy Sunset.

So, he betrays her, while threatening to finish off Sunset, so he could take her Padawan, intending to make him(Ben Solo) into a spitting image of Darth Vader.

“Demetria!” Sunset gasped, seeing the injured Twi’lek. “Are you alright?”

“SUNSET LOOK OUT!” Sonata shouted.

Without warning, barely dodging a lightsaber from Darth Andromedis, Sunset staggering backward, before she received a kick to the stomach.

Sunset Shimmer was nearly fell down a large hole, barely hanging onto the cavern’s rocks for dear life.

Darth Andromedis towered over her as he glared in disgust.

“Look how the mighty Darth Seraphina has fallen you STUPID! PATHETIC! MORTAL!” Andromedis spatted, slashing his lightsaber at one of Sunset’s hands.

Sunset’s hand would’ve been chopped off had she not pulled it away in time. Unfortunately, this left her hanging with just one more hand.

“I’VE TOLERATED WITH YOUR EXISTENCE FOR FAR TOO LONG, YOU STUPID GIRL!” Andromedis ranted, as he plunges his lightsaber into Sunset’s hand, causing the girl to scream in agony. “Now your time is UP! And don’t worry! I’ll take. GOOD! CARE! OF! DARTH VADER’S GRANDSON!”

“NO!” Sunset hissed in pain.

(Description of how Darth Andromedis gets pummeled and punished right here)

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“I’VE TOLERATED WITH YOUR EXISTENCE FOR FAR TOO LONG, YOU STUPID GIRL!” Andromedis ranted, as he plunges his lightsaber into Sunset’s hand, causing the girl to scream in agony. “Now your time is UP! And don’t worry! I’ll take. GOOD! CARE! OF! DARTH VADER’S GRANDSON!”

“NO!” Sunset hissed in pain.

Monsters Inc. Reference!

Comment posted by Postwarmonkey50 deleted April 23rd
Dramamaster829
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Hmm... I'm not sure about this one. Especially since family could be a touchy subject. We'll have to put a pin on this one.

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Wait, should I add my OC in this?

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Wait, should I add my OC in this?

Maybe, seeing as how my ponysona is now making appearances.

But, ideally, we should be writing how our fire headed girl overcomes Mr. E's bad OC, or who in the chamber would come to her rescue.

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Alright...I think I got it. (And it will partially have a reference to Craig of the Creek)
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That's when he was hit by a Rainbow blur, knocking him backwards and skid on the ground. When Andromedis looked up, he saw six girls standing at the ready, whilst a certain shy one helped Sunset up. To Sunset's shock, it was her friends from CHS.

"Girls!!" said Sunset in excitement.

"Like we said, Sunset." said Applejack, "We're at our strongest when we work together."

"We always have your back, no matter what!!" said Rainbow.

Sunset smirked and looked at Andromedis, "Then let's take him down...together!!"

Sunset and the Rainbooms charged on all directions, with Andromedis shouting, "No matter how many comes, I will crush you!!"

Andromedis fired his Force Lightning, but the girls dodged it and attacked from all around.

"Stupify!!" shouted Rarity and Fluttershy.

This stunned Andromedis, allowing Rainbow, Applejack, and Sunset to deliver a few punches, whilst they were able to duel against him via Lightsabers. Then he jumped out of the way as Sci-Twi and Pinkie jumped in and shouted, "Bombarda/Diffindo!!"

This caused Andromedis to be sliced by the chest, and knocked hard and made him crash against the wall, but then he got up, but not before the girls charged up their spells and shouted all together, "Expelliarmus!!"

This knocked him hard again, then the girls ended up surrounding him, but Andromedis looked like he won't let up.

"Why are you six siding with her," said Andromedis, "She's done more damage than anyone else still standing!!"

"She's already paid for her mistakes, you brute!!" shouted Rarity.

"Sunset was turned into a monster because all of you tricked her into thinking we didn't care!!" said Fluttershy.

"But nobody messes with our friend like that, not even the likes of you!!" said Pinkie Pie.

"Oh, I haven't even begun yet, for once I deal with her, I will take Darth Vader's grandson under my wing, and..." said Andromedis before being cut off.

"His name is Anakin Skywalker." said Rainbow.

"He turned into a monster no thanks to that emperor and destroyed everything around him!!" said Applejack.

"Though then again, the Jedi was supposed to be neutral, and instead, all of you made them slaves to politicians instead of staying out of their affairs." said Sci-Twi.

"It matters not," said Andromedis, "Seraphina was always a weakling because of her past connections. If it were up to me, I would've slayed her long ago, and in the end, she has no one to blame but herself, all because she thought she could be a better Sith."

That's when Sunset remembered what Postwar told her about the past Sith Lords, and that the ancient Sith were disappointed and hated Palpatine for going against their laws and because of his obsessions, how each Sith were more dangerous than the last, and given what she has seen, she would see they pale in comparison. Then she looked at him with determination.

"You don't know the first thing, about being a Sith." said Sunset, gaining Andromedis' attention, "You're no Darth Revan. You're no Darth Malak. You're no Darths Sion and Nihilus, and you're definitely not on Darth Malgus' level."

Andromedis was taken aback by this, but growled, "What did you say?"

"You heard me." said Sunset as she stepped forward, "You're no real Sith. You're just a bully, who only hurts innocent people, just to desperately try to please the dark one and gain respect. That's why, no matter how hard you try, no matter how hard you fight, or the innocent you hurt. Deep down, you know these people only fear you, because of your title, but nobody, wants to be afraid of a big baby, named Andromedis."

Andromedis was taken aback by this. Then he growled in anger and shouted, "Shut your mouth!!"

As he struck, suddenly Sunset blocked it with her hand via Force, making him struggle.

"As for me, yes I may have been a Sith, and I may have done a lot of terrible things," said Sunset as she stepped forward whilst Andromedis struck left and right, but Sunset kept on blocking it, "But that was because all of you captured me, tricked me, forced me to become a monster. And though I did it out of my own free will, I didn't choose to rebel because the Dazzlings were behind it. They used that weakness against me because they saw it first hand. I'll always have a temper problem, that much is true."

As he struck, she had her lightsaber out and blocked it, allowing her to look at him face to face.

"But now I'm using my anger to do something creative," said Sunset whilst squinting her eyes, "By protecting my friends from monsters like you!!!"

Sunset did a strong Force Push, pushing Andromedis against the wall. He struggled to break free of that and moved a bit forward, until Sunset used her most strongest one, knocking Andromedis so hard, part of the wall nearly shattered.

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"As for me, yes I may have been a Sith, and I may have done a lot of terrible things," said Sunset as she stepped forward whilst Andromedis struck left and right, but Sunset kept on blocking it, "But that was because all of you captured me, tricked me, forced me to become a monster. And though I did it out of my own free will, I didn't choose to rebel because the Dazzlings were behind it. They used that weakness against me because they saw it first hand. I'll always have a temper problem, that much is true."

As he struck, she had her lightsaber out and blocked it, allowing her to look at him face to face.

"But now I'm using my anger to do something creative," said Sunset whilst squinting her eyes, "By protecting my friends from monsters like you!!!"

Sunset did a strong Force Push, pushing Andromedis against the wall. He struggled to break free of that and moved a bit forward, until Sunset used her most strongest one, knocking Andromedis so hard, part of the wall nearly shattered.

Lemon Zest: “ROCK N ROLL!!!”

Me: “YES! There you go, Sunset!”

Stellar Flare: “That’s my girl!”

Sunburst: “WAY TO GO, SIS!!!”

Princess Luna: (Smiles respectfully) “Like the phoenix, she has risen from the ashes.” (To Anakin) “Like you, Ani.”

Anakin Skywalker: (To Luna) “Don’t embarrass me, Luna…”

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Amazing Job! Phantom and Postwar :pinkiesmile:

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Why thank you. *takes a bow*

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