EOneirophobia

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Sad
• Slice of Life

Starlight has nightmares about her past. Fortunately, Luna tries to help her out.

• Alt. Universe
• Luna
• Starlight Glimmer

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Review: Oneirophobia

Tags: dark, sad, slice of life, Alternate Universe

Summary: Not canon, but it’s a good Alternate timeline.

Review: This is pretty interesting I wish it was a little bit longer but there can be a sequel to this. The grammar is fine, the idea is pretty well done, and time and effort are pretty much not known for some fiction.  

I have to say this is at least a 8/10 for me.  Well, you never know if there is going to be a sequel.

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