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Flora Blossom
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EMentor and Friend
After getting discharged, Sunset pushed back her scars in the night.
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Review: Mentor and Friend

Tags: EQG, Drama, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe

Summary:  Sounds like a horrible nightmare but where is the horror I'm curious.

Review: Oh I see.  Interesting than the I’ll be there for the highs and lows.  A first-person perspective is not my favorite but I say it’s alright.  I still think the I cliche is pretty much not good… Well I still think it’s good I think…?    6.5/10 this is better than the last fiction that I read… first person is a double edge sword.  I just wish it was more of a little more horror instead of slice of life.

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