ENight Out

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Slice of Life

Three mares spend an entire night together, but of course, things don't go the way things are supposed to be planned.

• Trixie
• Maud Pie
• Starlight Glimmer

Catpaw616 · 4.7k words  ·  19  2 · 773 views

Review: Night Out

Tags: Comedy, Slice of Life

Summary: Not Not twice and then they fixed it later!  

Summary part 2: This fiction is about a night with Trixie, Starlight Glimmer, and Maud.

Review:  After the fix I’m sure I should criticize this poor person.  Yes I’m 100% sure…  Before the fix…  not not was there twice. But since the fix, however, the judgment shall change.

I had fun reading this. I thought it was funny!!!  I laughed at the grammar and then the fix.  I had a great time with this fiction. The grammar is now correct!

10/10  wooooo!!!!!  The flow is great for comedy and the slice of life is pretty much in there.  This is now top tier and I’m putting this to remember me by on how to fix the fiction first before reviewing it.  I should be ashamed of myself.  Trust me this won't happen again though it will be a one time thing.

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Lmao thanks for pointing out the not not error lol. Glad you liked the story and thanks for reviewing it 👍