My Little Reviews & Feedback 505 members · 861 stories
Comments ( 1 )
  • Viewing 1 - 50 of 1
Flora Blossom
Group Contributor
TOcean Blues
Shortly after the Battle of the Bands, a new student arrives at Canterlot High School. Nobody knows her and she's not in a mood to make any friends. On any other school, she'd end up as a loner, but maybe at CHS, there's hope for a change.
TalkingToMyself · 201k words  ·  85  4 · 2.9k views

Review: Ocean Blues

Tags: Violence, Sucide/harm, profanity, drama, slice of life, tragedy, 

Summary: This takes place after the battle of the bands/rainbow rocks of Equestria Girls.

Review:  This is a great story and deserves to catch my interest. Alternate universe is a great call for the tag and it is spot on that has to do with the story at hoof.  Character background is alright in my books.  You showed a lot to get far when you alone wrote a long fiction.  It took a lot of time and effort.  There might be a place for you in writing.  So, I slap this fiction with a 10/10.  Between author and fiction  this is what masterpiece is like and should be.  All the paragraphs are neat and professional.  This fiction truly does need more attention.

As I said 10/10 fiction.  I enjoyed it to the fullest.

  • Viewing 1 - 50 of 1