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Flora Blossom
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TRooftop
Sunset Shimmer and Abacus Cinch have a conversation at the end of the world.
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Review: Rooftop

Tags: Death, Romance, Drama, Sci-fi, Alternate Universe

Summary: The world is going to end theory.

Review: This fiction is completely based on theories and calculations.  It’s like if we traded the moon for Jupiter.  Earth would have exploded due to Jupiter's massive pull on the earth and also reshape the earth with massive earthquakes along the way.  However, that’s just a theory.  For the fiction of itself is good.  I think it deserves more attention.  There might be one paragraph that I might question later.  I think this is pretty solid fiction. It has it’s greats and some flaws.  But however this is a theory fiction so flaws are a good thing because not all theories can be perfect.

I do like this.  I have to put at least an 8/10 for this.  It is a good read and it’s still a good way to think about how the world is going to end.

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