ECherry Bombs in the Sky

• MLP: FiM
• Slice of Life

Fluttershy makes a daring shopping trip during a thunderstorm.

• Fluttershy
• Angel

SunTwi06 · 1.8k words  ·  15  2 · 269 views

Review: Cherry Bombs in the Sky

Summary: Fluttershy goes shopping for cherries in a storm with the help of her friends.

Review: It seems pretty cannon… helping others to get stuff is a great thing.  I wonder if Hasbro did something like this in their series of MLP.   Present tense this fiction is and it is good.  However, there are a few things such as punctuation though.

The story is interesting and a good idea at least 10/10 for good idea for a friendship lesson.  This is a spot on fiction at E for everyone.  

The true score of this fiction comes down to how she did it.  Which this fiction did.  This is some good one shot character development.  Not a long story but short it truly is. 

I give this at least an 8/10 in my books. It's close to perfection, it just needs some care for punctuation.