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EWhat Does Music Really Mean?

• Equestria Girls
• Sad
• Slice of Life

In Canterlot City, Twilight and her friends work in a retirement home for musicians. And over time, they discover what the true meaning of music is about.

• Human
• Spike
• Other
• Main 7 (EqG)

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