Please give me comments on my story.
I need constructive criticism, and helpful comments, and in return I’ll comment on your stories.
Please give me comments on my story.
I need constructive criticism, and helpful comments, and in return I’ll comment on your stories.
- Equestria Girls
- Sad
- Slice of Life
In Canterlot City, Twilight and her friends work in a retirement home for musicians. And over time, they discover what the true meaning of music is about.