Well, it's been a while since our last review, hasn't it? Let's get down to business.

Story: Slim Pickings by ocalhoun
1,438 words
Tags: Comedy, Random, Slice of Life

Grammar: 10/10
As far as I could tell, the story is free from errors.
Characterization: 10/10
I could actually see something like this happening in the canon universe. Twilight reacts to the situation in the way you'd expect. The joke is kind of mean-spirited, but is well suited to the princesses' characters.
Use of Canon: 10/10
Nothing to complain about here. No inconsistencies from the show in terms of referenced events.
Plot Consistency: 10/10
The plot is simple, and doesn't lead the reader astray. Everything that happens is reasonably based in earlier events.
Coherence: 9.5/10
From start to finish, the story flows at a comfortable rate. The only issue I had was the unnecessary Twidash shipping, which felt a tad forced.
Other: 9.75/10
Comedy: 4/4
Not gut-busting, but definitely worth a warm chuckle.
Random: 3/3
Like all good jokes.
SoL: 2.75/3
It satisfies the quota, but doesn't feel like an everyday experience.

Total: 59.25/60 98.75% Approved
A cute little fic about the Princesses pulling a prank on Twilight. One of the better comedies I've seen on the site, if you're looking for a quick laugh, this is the story for you.

3755325 Looks good to me!

Was gonna mention it's site not sight btw!

3755337 fixed.

3755343 Sorry, I've been horrific with my own spelling and grammar so I'm trying a new thing were I simply look for EVERY mistake I can see no matter how small in hopes of making myself find more of my own mistakes easier ><

3755349 Well, if you ever need a proofreader, just pm me. I'll try to get back to you.

3755325
I just now found this, and I'm bursting with joy! ^.^

I hope I'll someday see my other stories reviewed here.