This is primarily a video review! Yay, my first one. However, I'll post a written one also.

Check the story by Lokimen here!

Here's the gist: Diamond Tiara hangs out with Snails for an afternoon, and enjoys herself immensely.

MOOD: Cute and endearing.

Grammar: A+

Style: I've seen it before, but it still worked.

This was an awesome story. The characterization was terrific. I mean, DT was just as mean as she is in the show, and Snails was simplistic and sincere. They worked great together, leading to a wonderfully cute one-shot.

The story carries a good message about what's important in life, and sometimes you need to step back and notice what's around you. The author portrayed that excellently in my opinon.

The pairing is a relatively uncommon one, and the pacing was great. The only thing i can complain about was a few misplaced punctuations and such. Not a big deal though.

It may feel a little cliche at times, but this is definitely a quick, cute read. Check it out!

Final Verdict: 8.5/10

2690870
Exactly how I want a video review done in this group. Well done.

2690948 i gave you a shoutout at the very end, btw

2690870
Wow... I don't know what to say. Thanks for the review, and I'm happy that you enjoyed my story.