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FamousLastWords
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Here's the story by Toesty.

Let me start with this: this story is original. A changeling and an OC are the couple, and it's very unique in design.

Here's the gist: A stallion enters into a pact with the changelings after his wife dies.

Mood: Eerie would be the best word.

Grammar: Top of the line.

Style: Very original.

Now, this wasn't necessarily my cup of tea. But it was an interesting, thought-provoking read. The constant shifts in POV were confusing however, and some plot points were a tad clunky feeling.

If you like original works and changeling stories, this is definitely a must read. If you like romance, this won't be your favourite, but you could do a lot worse with your 15 minute reading block.

Final Verdict: 7/10

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thanks for the review, will need to look at it again when I have time and adress those

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