Let me start with this: this story is original. A changeling and an OC are the couple, and it's very unique in design.
Here's the gist: A stallion enters into a pact with the changelings after his wife dies.
Mood: Eerie would be the best word.
Grammar: Top of the line.
Style: Very original.
Now, this wasn't necessarily my cup of tea. But it was an interesting, thought-provoking read. The constant shifts in POV were confusing however, and some plot points were a tad clunky feeling.
If you like original works and changeling stories, this is definitely a must read. If you like romance, this won't be your favourite, but you could do a lot worse with your 15 minute reading block.
Here's the story by Toesty.
Let me start with this: this story is original. A changeling and an OC are the couple, and it's very unique in design.
Here's the gist: A stallion enters into a pact with the changelings after his wife dies.
Mood: Eerie would be the best word.
Grammar: Top of the line.
Style: Very original.
Now, this wasn't necessarily my cup of tea. But it was an interesting, thought-provoking read. The constant shifts in POV were confusing however, and some plot points were a tad clunky feeling.
If you like original works and changeling stories, this is definitely a must read. If you like romance, this won't be your favourite, but you could do a lot worse with your 15 minute reading block.
Final Verdict: 7/10
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thanks for the review, will need to look at it again when I have time and adress those