As always, it seems that the stories I do not put much thought into soar, while the ones that are dear to me flop. I ask you, If you like adventures and various comedy, please check out my story, Watching the World Burn.

As always, it seems that the stories I do not put much thought into soar, while the ones that are dear to me flop.

This is a battle I've been facing ever since I joined this website. My first story on this site continues to be largely unknown, despite the fact that everyone who reads it seems to love it. So, as one who has been there, let me tell you something: it's not because your story is bad. You've been here for a little less than two weeks as of this writing, and it's hard to be noticed from the very beginning.

As a general rule, I don't read incomplete stories. I think I'll give yours a chance... and then we shall see if I can identify exactly why your darling is flopping around like a fish out of water.