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Spellbound
Romance Dark Tragedy
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68365/spellbound
clickme http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68365/spellbound

Twilight sparkle becomes a user of dark magic, falls in love with the leader of a cult, aids in the return of king sombra, and begins a war in equestria. Also, industrialization.

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ammendum: unfinished, 63,000 words

Title: The Adventures of Silent Shot (or, 014 Reporting for Duty)
Tags: Adventure, Dark
Super short sum-up: Silent Shot is a top member of the Equestrian Reconnaissance Agency. She is sent out to investigate a failed assassination attempt on Shining Armor, but uncovers a plot to destroy Equestria.