Hello guys. I am King Genesis and I'm writing this to know your opinions about my story.
It's a story I planned a long time ago and decided to share it on FIMFiction in February 2019. I had to rewrite it once because English is not my main language and I had lots of grammar mistakes.
W and Jack, two gangsters from Los Mantos City, are sent to Canterlot High to take care of their boss' granddaughters: Rarity and Sweetie Belle. What would happen if they get a chance to rob the place of their dreams?
The story's description is the same as the original story before rewriting. I haven't modified anything from it. It is also a long story, at the moment it has 14 chapters (you don't have to read them all if you want).
Hello guys. I am King Genesis and I'm writing this to know your opinions about my story.
It's a story I planned a long time ago and decided to share it on FIMFiction in February 2019. I had to rewrite it once because English is not my main language and I had lots of grammar mistakes.
- Equestria Girls
- Dark
- Comedy
W and Jack, two gangsters from Los Mantos City, are sent to Canterlot High to take care of their boss' granddaughters: Rarity and Sweetie Belle. What would happen if they get a chance to rob the place of their dreams?The story's description is the same as the original story before rewriting. I haven't modified anything from it. It is also a long story, at the moment it has 14 chapters (you don't have to read them all if you want).
I will expect your feedback. Thank you!