Hello guys. I am King Genesis and I'm writing this to know your opinions about my story.

It's a story I planned a long time ago and decided to share it on FIMFiction in February 2019. I had to rewrite it once because English is not my main language and I had lots of grammar mistakes.

TWaters: Equestrian Gangster (Original Version)

• Equestria Girls
• Dark
• Comedy

W and Jack, two gangsters from Los Mantos City, are sent to Canterlot High to take care of their boss' granddaughters: Rarity and Sweetie Belle. What would happen if they get a chance to rob the place of their dreams?

• Sex
• Narcotics
• Violence
• Death
• Profanity
• OC
• Other
• Main 7 (EqG)

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The story's description is the same as the original story before rewriting. I haven't modified anything from it. It is also a long story, at the moment it has 14 chapters (you don't have to read them all if you want).

I will expect your feedback. Thank you!