A small team of soldiers from the secretive Stable 70 set out to shed zebra blood in the name of home and country, only to be greeted by a much harsher and muddier reality.
I'm already getting a great vibe of badassery from this, and I've only reached the third paragraph. I've marked it for reading later, because its like a quarter past 4 in the morning and I should sleep. Looking forward to reading this later!
*The radio spurts out bursts of static as you try to find the right frquency, untill... * ...ening laaaadies aaand getlemen, and welcome to the janekfan comment show! So, what shall I be talking of today, I hear you ask? Well, you see, I like to read things. And recently I've read a rather stupendous little story. Only the first chapter, frankly, but I can already tell it's going to be a blast! First off, the main character FINALLY isn't one of these ~oh everyone up there's going to love each other especially after P ( it's P for Plenty you see) years after they nuked everyone to shit. I wonder why there hadn't been any attempts at communicating with us though.~ guys and has a somewhat realistic (if a teensy bit prejudiced) view of the outside. And I do like me a no-nonsense main character! And folks, for today and for this chapter, that'd be all. BUT JANEKFAN! - I hear your dissapointed voices cry out - WHERE'S THE USUAL WALL OF TEXT? WHER'S THE DEMENTED RANTIG ABOUT GRAMMAR MISTAKES? Well my children, I've only just finished reading the first chapter, and I post those long comments only on recently updated chapters. This means that you ( yes you, my kind author) should expect one of those lengthy ones at the end of the latest chapter, whenever med school lets me read up to it. As for now... Stay in good health - -janekfan P.S. Top-tech is sort of like topkek, don't you think?
I'm already getting a great vibe of badassery from this, and I've only reached the third paragraph. I've marked it for reading later, because its like a quarter past 4 in the morning and I should sleep. Looking forward to reading this later!
This is really awesome! But now I feel like playing Battle Field 4. Odd?
Wow. They're in for a surprise.
You gonna add this to the FO:E group?
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Don't worry, that's why I'm here.
4521067 Thanks for that, totally slipped my mind last night
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No need to thank me, it's kind of what I do.
Just so you know, your story was-... oh whatever you know what group your story was added to Feel free to PM me if you have any questions!
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That is the greatest way you've ever said that someone's story has been added to the FoE group.
This needs way more likes.
About time this got here.
-Sage
Can't wait for Chapter 2.
4568434 Hopefully you won't have to wait long.
*The radio spurts out bursts of static as you try to find the right frquency, untill... *
...ening laaaadies aaand getlemen, and welcome to the janekfan comment show!
So, what shall I be talking of today, I hear you ask? Well, you see, I like to read things. And recently I've read a rather stupendous little story. Only the first chapter, frankly, but I can already tell it's going to be a blast!
First off, the main character FINALLY isn't one of these ~oh everyone up there's going to love each other especially after P ( it's P for Plenty you see) years after they nuked everyone to shit. I wonder why there hadn't been any attempts at communicating with us though.~ guys and has a somewhat realistic (if a teensy bit prejudiced) view of the outside. And I do like me a no-nonsense main character! And folks, for today and for this chapter, that'd be all.
BUT JANEKFAN! - I hear your dissapointed voices cry out - WHERE'S THE USUAL WALL OF TEXT? WHER'S THE DEMENTED RANTIG ABOUT GRAMMAR MISTAKES? Well my children, I've only just finished reading the first chapter, and I post those long comments only on recently updated chapters. This means that you ( yes you, my kind author) should expect one of those lengthy ones at the end of the latest chapter, whenever med school lets me read up to it. As for now...
Stay in good health -
-janekfan
P.S. Top-tech is sort of like topkek, don't you think?