KO awesome chapter, this story has caught my attention seeing the mane 6 and everyone going through tough adventures and some getting Devil Fruit powers and hopefully Jack will trust the royals once Ponyville is save.

I like this story, can't wait for more

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And I hope he won't trust them completely but just enough to be somewhat friendly
He shouldn't give them devil fruits and any knowledge about them and about his world ,like the book and technology

He should tell Shining to fuck himself
Generally, he shouldn't give Twilight the book no matter what. There is no reason for it, she isn't needed to know the contents of the book

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This is Twilight, Equestria's biggest book nerd if there is a single page of a book she hasn't read, she will hunt it down like a predator hunting prey.

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And she should be denied of it, he isn't obligated to give it to her in any way.

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True, but he could also give her small bits to tease her and get some laughs out of her craving for more knowledge.

Beautifully done my friend. Absolutely stunning to read.

I truly am not worthy to read such a great Fanfiction such as this

Live Long, Have Fun, and Never Make Sense
Because
What Fun Is There In Making Sense?

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This would just cause him more trouble and annoy him , he should make it clear that he won't give her the book and its contents and he doesn't care that she wants to know,it's not important for her to know. The minimum knowledge all devil fruits user should get is what their powers are and that's it

Also,if he will kill the changelings with devil fruits powers he should take back the respawned fruits to the box no matter what

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He's not Blackbeard, he's not going to kill someone if he doesn't have too and the Changelings haven't wronged him anywhere close to what the governments of Earth did so he's not going to see the point.

Jake also tends to do whatever he thinks will help him.

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he's not going to kill someone if he doesn't have too and the Changelings haven't wronged him

Well

Around the corner of a cliff face, Jake was cleaning his sword of blood, around him were the bodies of nearly 400 changelings with more heading his way. Applejack stopped spinning but something was different, Twilight looked at her friend and said, “Are you done? Come on we need to-” Twilight noticed something off about Applejack, more specifically off about her foot, when the other’s looked they saw it too.

I don't mean for him to kill the changelings with devil fruit powers when not needed but if the user is dangerous to him and will want to steal more fruits,etc

All he needs is a normal fruit too

He's not Blackbeard, he's not going to kill someone if he doesn't have too and the Changelings haven't wronged him anywhere close to what the governments of Earth did so he's not going to see the point.

He doesn't need to be Blackbeard to get devil fruits back ,I think I read about it somewhere
All you need is a fruit close by to be changed into a devil fruit
He should know about this

Devil Fruits exist in a cycle of circulation; when a Devil Fruit user dies, their ability is reborn in a new fruit. Instead of growing from a plant, the ability simply regenerates inside another similar fruit, as seen when Smiley "died" and the Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Axolotl transplanted itself into a nearby apple.

When this happens, the empowered fruit changes appearance. Some characteristics of a fruits transformation into a Devil Fruit include the stem becoming noticeably curlier than it was when the Fruit was not endowed with the ability. It also changes color and takes on the distinct spiral patters that Devil Fruits are known to have.^[24]

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Jake knows about the cycle of circulation in the anime, the thing is though, there are some key differences that The Devil-Devil Club found out about, like how in One Piece, one of the CP9 agents cut her devil fruit up before eating it, but for this world, the Devil Fruits can't be harmed by anything without the intention of eating it.

An example would be like two guys with swords about to attack the devil, one wanted to destroy the DF and the other guy wanted to eat it. The 'destroy the fruit' guy's sword would shatter while the 'eat the fruit' guy's sword would cut it like butter.

The cycle of circulation is in a similar boat, instead of transplanting to a 'nearby' fruit, it will transplant itself into a Random fruit, this wasn't brought up because I haven't gotten that far yet.

Also, I bring up Blackbeard cuz he killed other Devil Fruit users for their DFs.

Also Also, Chrysalis and Spinner are no threat, all Jake has to do is remove their hands and they're powerless since their powers are focused in their hands.

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Hmm I a have an idea
Let's say he will cut all his devil fruits in pieces of the size of the peas, while still thinking about eating them for it to work

Then he will throw all pieces into a jar, glass container and mix them.
Wouldnt that prevent everyone from eating them successfully ?
Because they wouldn't be able to eat all pieces and they would also eat pieces of other fruits which would kill them

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That wouldn't work because the fruits can sense false intention, also since Jake has eaten a DF it would be more than obvious that the intention. And in One Piece all it takes for the powers to be gained is for a small bite to be taken, you don't need to eat the entire fruit, the CP9 just took a single bite because the signal for a power being gained is a rotten taste in the mouth.

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Thanks

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Kinda agree with you there, if you tempt twilight sparkle with any kind of new knowledge she has never seen before she will stop at NOTHING to get her hands on this

This one seems like the kind who would probably try to sneakily steal the book, and if she fails say something stupid like "b-but I just want to read it, can you imagine all the new knowledge I can obtain and share with Ponies across the world!?"
It's his knowledge damnit let him decide what he does with it

Shining 10/10 go na try to threaten him for the book

‘Why does she bother naming that? It’s just a normal tackle.’ Jack thought before Rainbow was stopped by Spinner’s hand, his Devil Fruit power causing her to spin uncontrollably within his grasp.

Me: 'Glancing at Pokemon moves X-Scissor and Cross Poison' Does that mean I have to go to the move delete man's house again?

“Yes, that’s correct, thank you for re-explaining everything I spent 3-hours summing up so I didn’t have to say all of that, you colossal, monumental, gargantuan nerd,” Jake said, Twilight blushed in embarrassment.

Correction: Colossus nerd.

Twilight looked at the book and her pupils dilated, “Boooooook…” she said like a zombie saying brains, only for Jake to smack her with said book.

Me: Here you go Twilight! 'Evil grin, giving her a Isekai portal book to the medieval dark era'

Jake put the Devil Fruits in the box with the other 3 but remained silent, he glared at the 4 nobles before walking away. ‘What the fuck do these mares eat to get that fucking big?’ Jake thought.

I'd say the Goli Goli devil fruits? (Goliath devil fruits)

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Me: 'Glancing at Pokemon moves X-Scissor and Cross Poison' Does that mean I have to go to the move delete man's house again?

Yes.

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She'd do that even if she was told nothing at all.

So why not get a laugh out of it.

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Because that would also annoy the others and they would then try to pressure him into giving the book to her

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Now that I think about it, why bother hiding anything? It's not like he's got someone ready to bring him back to the human world. He's kinda stuck there.

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Because it's just asking for trouble, he should know that cliche, especially now that he is here
After all deaths of his friends, he should be more cautious

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Jake's fucked if he says nothing because the ponies will just keep bothering him and he's fucked if he says anything which is basically asking for trouble.

Jake is double fucked.

Damned if he does, damned if he don't
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Its a lose lose situation!

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That doesn't mean he shouldn't try and even then he can just give a small part of the information , this way he doesn't lie

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If he says something, while everypony and their mother will learn about DFs he won't be directly targeted for the info because it'll become common knowledge.

Then he can just not mention it to everyone that he has that knowledge in the first place
And if elements and royals will try to pressure him that way then he shouldn't give it anyway even more because of that and just go away from Equestria and it's dumb ponies

If he says nothing and tries to be a lone wolf, not only with villains go for him, ponies will think he's a monster in disguise and causing even more grief because they'll attack him.

Again, then he can just not focus attention on himself and not tell everyone he meets about devil fruits, duh

If you have a registered gun you don't go around telling everyone you have one

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If they can't shut up and keep that secret then why he should trust them and tell them about it anyway?
It would just prove that the right decision would be going away from ponies to build his home, base away from them

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I was referring to the Changelings, the elements might do it, but the Changelings sure won't, and where would he exactly go?

Jake knows absolutely nothing about Equestria, not to mention if he did do that he's all by himself.

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Okay, I'm just going to end this here, I've already got a good idea of how this story is going to go and it's not like the way your thinking, whatever that may be.

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Then please delete your own comments and not mine that don't break any rules

I already dealt before with another guy obsessed with Celestia royal ass that deleted any comments pointing out flaws in Celestia thinking in his story, so he was deleting every comment, blocking users from answering him, posting comments and like a baby turned off comments completely, then started bitching on his vlogs how fandom is unfair or something like that and still blocking users from defending their reasoning

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Sorry.

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Okay, I get it. It was my fault, sorry again.

Also, please do not give shining armor the Bari Bari no Mi (barrier-barrier fruit) would be way too obvious, seeing as he is already specialized with barriers

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Yeah, I wasn't actually going to give Shining Armor a Devil Fruit.

Also, are you going to stick to the devil fruits introduced in the show, or make up your own?

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A bit of both actually, like the ones Jake has in the box are DFs from the show while the ones the Changelings have I made up

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Just please do not add overpowered as heck DF's

Also, are you going to have sea prism stone in this story, and if so, will it work for magic as well, essentially being this realms "anti-magic" item?

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Also that was a really good DF, usable by a smart individual but not OP at all, good balance

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Got it.

Sea Prism Stone isn't available but there is an alternative made by Equestria's version of Vegapunk from One piece

Name: The Sift Sift Fruit

Also because I just thought of this, this is super similar to tsuru's DF

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Huh, I forgot about her.

Also an idea since you said you use some custom DF's, maybe take suggestions from the comments for fruits, and if people really want maybe a user for the fruit as well?

Like:
Type:
Effect:
Visual change on body:
(When I say visua change l I mean like for example Alvida (first human pirate Luffy fought, fat before she ate the Smooth-smooth fruit, making all objects slip on her, including body fat slipping right off)

(If a user for the fruit):
Species:
Gender:
Age:
Heigh:
Bust size: (if female, since that is a thing in this story,) (if the user wants to suggest bust size but not like stupid sizes like, triple ZZZ)
Other bodily descriptions:

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So like asking for OCs?

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If people have one and a devil fruit they think might fit then maybe, but up to you

Just throwing in suggestions since I really wanna see this story go for a long time, I can tell it has lots of promise

So far I’m really liking this.