I love to provide constructive criticism based on grammar, story structure, understanding of the characters, and plot. I read aloud using 1 of 3 different narration voices, which is what my pfp is of.
Rainbow Dash was finally able to get time off for a vacation, but on her three days off at the beach, somepony called in sick at the lighthouse sticking her with the boring task. But when a ship appears on the horizon, things get interesting.