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Xenobyte


Story status: Chapter 19 in progress.

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  • 85 weeks
    New cover art

    What do you guys think of the new one? I always felt the old art was rather simplistic, but never had the time to solve that issue. Today, after finishing with a scene for a new chapter, I took my time to look into this issue, and this was the result.

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  • 87 weeks
    Total overhaul of prologue.

    Today I've uploaded the total overhaul of the old prologue, which had transformed into a full chapter 1, along with the revamp of the following chapters 2 and 3. The story will no longer have a prologue.

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    0 comments · 187 views
  • 100 weeks
    Next chapter

    Hi everyone! Just a little heads-up about the next chapter. It’s been a while since the last release, but that was just due to very limited free time. Even this week I’m working through the weekend, though I had still written a good chunk of the chapter and I’ll release it on the next week when I’ll finally have quite a lot of time for it. I haven’t lost interest in writing, so rest assured that

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    1 comments · 229 views
  • 122 weeks
    Chapter 9

    Hi everyone!

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    2 comments · 131 views
  • 128 weeks
    NSFW warnings: needed or not?

    Hi everyone! So, the question is the same as in the title: do any of you need any warnings about explicit clop scenes, considering the M rating and mentioning the stuff in the description? Or would you prefer to have no spoilers like that?

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Sep
2nd
2022

Total overhaul of prologue. · 3:06am Sep 2nd, 2022

Today I've uploaded the total overhaul of the old prologue, which had transformed into a full chapter 1, along with the revamp of the following chapters 2 and 3. The story will no longer have a prologue.

The initial purpose was to cut down the excessive infodump, though it's still there, inevitably, and make it more structured across all three chapters. The duplicating information was mostly cut down. I also added more life into the scenes and characters' behavior than there initially was, and the beginning chapter must be a lot more pleasant to read now. The whole endeavor appeared to be significantly harder to work on compared to writing a new chapter, as I had to keep full track of all the information feed and events spanning over the three chapters. Still, the task is done, and I hope you like the results.

If you decide to read it, feel free to point out any mistakes and errors.

Have a good one, folks!

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