Total overhaul of prologue. · 3:06am Sep 2nd, 2022
Today I've uploaded the total overhaul of the old prologue, which had transformed into a full chapter 1, along with the revamp of the following chapters 2 and 3. The story will no longer have a prologue.
The initial purpose was to cut down the excessive infodump, though it's still there, inevitably, and make it more structured across all three chapters. The duplicating information was mostly cut down. I also added more life into the scenes and characters' behavior than there initially was, and the beginning chapter must be a lot more pleasant to read now. The whole endeavor appeared to be significantly harder to work on compared to writing a new chapter, as I had to keep full track of all the information feed and events spanning over the three chapters. Still, the task is done, and I hope you like the results.
If you decide to read it, feel free to point out any mistakes and errors.
Have a good one, folks!