Prolonged Blog Post and Rewrite alert

Alright everybody! New news today and better now than never or later!

As of now, I've rewritten the Prologue while the new chapter is being written, and hopefully I've made a massive amount of improvement over my first start of the story!
Most of the explanation is at the AN of that chapter, but to reiterate, I ended up having a thought before getting the inspiration to not only rewrite but change things up with the Prologue, some of this is a bit newly added information and it'll mean I gotta pause on writing to make sure continuity is working properly!

Do be sure to tell me if its a much better improvement over the previous and first attempt at it, either here or in the story itself. I do kind of need the feedback to improve, so rly no need to get shy or feel like just reading's enough of an approval. Please and thank you very much!