Apr
20th
2022
Rewrite Permission · 1:24am Apr 20th, 2022
If it’s okay with you guys, I might do some rewriting on a few chapters I’ve originally done, but I need to do some thinking about it, but I’ll also keep the rest of whatever I have done the same but maybe shorten some of the characters?
And maybe have some of the characters I’ve taken out saved for another time?
If you read this, let me know what rewrites you suggest either as a comment or PM, and I’ll think about it soon.
K
ok then.
Alright
Ok.
Okay i understand and take your time
Ok, first cut most of the friendship game story.
5652252
Okay
Please keep A Place in Equestria III in the Better Together series. Also, please go back to writing Thomas at the School of Friendship.
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I am
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What about going back to writing Good Times in Equestria: Thomas at the School of Friendship?
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That too
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The question is are you really going to do it? Cause every time you say you’ll write this story soon it never happens. Not meaning to sound rude or anything. Just a question.
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I don’t want to right now. I just have other things in mind. And can you please stop asking me the same question over and over again? It’s really starting to get on my nerves. No offense though.
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I’m sorry. It’s just that I like this story and I’ve been waiting for this story to be updated and I’m anxious to see what happens next.
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I know, but sometimes we all have other things to do in life.
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And what should I replace it with? Or do you prefer a different idea?
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I said to have the story start after the friendship game.
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Can I still use Cliffjumper’s death though?
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K
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And what about the first two chapters?