Chapter 4 · 5:01pm Oct 31st, 2011
Chapter 4 is nearly done i just need to edit the crap out of it . Should be up either tonight or some time tommorow.
just got the mail back from EQD . seems the work needs more work... heh . thats fine like any critique I plan to alter the problems I need to go back and redo the lot of it . Might delay chapter 5 a bit doing that though but with luck I can make the story cleaner still. would'nt mind help if any ones offering .