"Giving Up" to "Descent"

I finally went back and changed Giving Up for, hopefully, the better. There were a lot of errors that I found and a few things I had to change based on the comments and errors I found in general.

I changed the title as the person who "commissioned" it decided not to pay so I'm just going to treat it as my work again. Despite that, I hope the changes provide more context and a better reading experience for you all.

Want to reread Giving Up? Go to Descent; Same idea, same concept, minor fixes, and changes.