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Black--Soul


German , Trying to write something worth while. Everyone start small after all. Enjoy the Story fellow Bronys (^///-///^)/)

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  • 4 weeks
    Really bad news, request for help!

    There was a error in the editing of the chapter 7 of my Marksaline story.
    The result was losing the chapter content.
    Has anyone a copy of my Marksaline story stored somewhere?!
    Otherwise the chapter 7 is lost...

    8 comments · 114 views
  • 4 weeks
    I am in a naughty mood~♡

    The titel already giving you hopes?
    Time to continue the Changeling Empress adventure.
    Some clop, tons of proofreading, continuation of the storyline.
    Also I see i just made 1 update 2023 for that story.
    Really wasted that year working to hard...

    Anyway...

    I proofreading recently alot of my stories, fixed a lot of typos even after years... :facehoof:

    Read More

    4 comments · 67 views
  • 4 weeks
    Update and accidentally publishing

    Chapter special:
    Pantyhose Warrior - 'The Bad Dragon' is a Breezee?

    The over 7000 word chapter isn't done, I miss clicking. The editing button is still without space beside the publishing one :facehoof:

    Mostly proofreading and some line I have to change up near the end. Probably editing some humor in as well.

    Perhaps done in a hour. We shall see.

    Stay snuggly :pinkiesmile:👍

    3 comments · 39 views
  • 6 weeks
    New story is out

    This will be a side project, but two other chapter are mostly done, awaiting brain bleaching proofreading.

    I am currently editing my Gray story next chapter.
    It's a special giving introduction to multiple characters and add three side Characters to the story.

    Three Author's will have their user name as Character name, two mostly because the third is slightly tricky to use.

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    1 comments · 42 views
  • 9 weeks
    Very sad to see a favorite story be canceled

    Andrew Joshua Talon, he just left the community.
    Since 2012 activ and one of my favorite stories
    Short Hand
    The sequel to
    The Stars Revolt!
    Always sad to see a magnificent Author go.
    He will be dearly missed.

    I legitimately have tears in my eyes...

    Stay snuggly :pinkiesad2:

    4 comments · 122 views
Jan
18th
2022

Selene The Crimson RED Changeling Empress Chapter 11 · 4:06pm Jan 18th, 2022

Selene The Crimson RED Changeling Empress Chapter eleven. Vote looks so far pretty one sided.
I wonder if that because of common sence or some actually read the storys i get my voting idea from...

Anyway i have a bit of a absolutly mad idea...
Please tell me what you think about it. Here is the very rough and unfinished version of Chapter 11:
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Selene The Crimson RED Changeling Empress
By: " Black--Soul "

Chapter Eleven: xxx

Write the vote result here
Xxxx

So mutch to do, so few time getting it all done. After all no matter if her Dungeon would be found in a week or in a year, nothing would be completed. The only question was how mutch was completed until the unavoudable first solo Pawn or Team of Wanna be heros come to lay slay the evil Changeling Empress...

She really hoped some non Changeling Pawn really wrote down Hearts Desire chat answers and spread the word. This Princess Celestia seem to be a strong individual or a good leader to have enough support to have imprisoned a Changeling Queen with her hive. That said it is clear this Celestia is different from the shows depiction and was a sadistic piece of shit.

Who imprisoned a Village or City population worth in a place it would be impossible to keep themself supplied, slowly starving to death. Since this Queen seem to have the admiration of a non Ling i guess she can't be that bad... Especially knowing that Changelings are a fundamental Symbiotic race, she found herself instinctive protective of her Stud Herd after they mated her.

There for it was unlikely that another Changeling would not be also inclined to protect her live stock. Perhaps a bit cruel to look that way at sapient beings, but as long it ends in a mutual benefishal relationship between Changelings and harvesting individuals / groups, it should be alright... Selene really regrets to have the series in memory, but mostly forget what the comics depicted... Had Celestia a good reason to try starve Chrysalis & her Hive to death or not?
Impossible to say, impossible to help out.

Than again this was probably some kind of Multiverse thing. In other words, this might have the MLP theme but for Selene Crimson know, this was far from the rainbow flavored series made for children and enjoyed by adults. After all, she had close to her Cave a Zebra not older than 18 that had bleed out to death when sapient Hyenas rip into it... Selenes human memory could not recall sapient Hyenas or anyone actually dying in the series. Not on screen.

Selene was wanted dead by over half the external Gods still fighting for Equus place to become a local god. Pretty sure stuff like that don't fit in with the Series as well. Selene had no illusion of her survivel to the end of the game, but she would make it as expensive as possible for everycreature coming for her to attack her home, her herd, her future swarm and herself.
Her knowlege even if only partialy correct should give her a certain edge. Anyway...

She had cost Anubis a shitload of Spawnpoints so if she made it worth enough enemy Spawnpoints to make his Investments worth it, he should be willing to keep his piece of the deal up. The chat had confirmed him to be a decent God that actually cared for his expandable Pawns, so with a sufficent enough kill count on enemy Pawns he should be willing to go trough the effort keeping his/her Mother and the once perishing near to his/her heart on the better end of the afterlife.

Right now she would focus on (vote result), than she would go for her other objectives.

No one is invoundrable in a closed system. A planets population can't get and more closed up than that... Ressources are finate, population can only he holded surported that long... Who ever would win, there was a lot of stuff to do. Hearts Desire god had his plans to get Equus space tech advanced to make new Worlds, to continue the Game once more, yet i wonder if

Xxx


Nazara prepared the return of her kind in a few thousand years, but for now she needed to make sure she had the edge over her silblings of the past harvest cycels. Nazara was the youngest of the accended from the last cycel and was there for the one responsible for the next 2 harvesting cycels, or until the next xxx was found. When Nazara found this pocket dimensional space inside Harvest arm 2 of 4, it was quite the surprise. This Galaxy arm was harvested over 250 cycels, yet it was clear that within this time that pocket universe had existed.

Test that Nazara conducted showed that time flowed 1:1 and there for her siblings had overlooked it for a long long time. To their luck was the found technology on the dead world never superior to their own technology harvested over many harvests since their race earned freedom and started the cycel of organic material snd rsw material harvests to fullfil the redicules demands to produce a singel member of their Sociathy.

The cycel of the Prothean had produced 9 entire units out of 5 races, this Galaxy arm had birthed 5000 of it's kind. From the:
- Destroyer: Main attack force inside planetary orbit.
- Carriers: Transports troop and war equicment.
- Processors: Production of Bioraw material and Rawmaterial for new Units.
- Leviathans: Main Space combat Ship to Ship combat forces. Remote control of Indoctrination mental wasted away infantery/Infiltrators.
- Sovereign-class: The Ruler class of the xxx

It was holding a bit more than 200.000 worlds inside it, mostly uninhabited or to undeveloped to support life, yet there are clear indicators that many world once holded Civilisation's. Knowing that not her kind had harvested them was very puzzeling and also infuriating. So many potencial Species that could have been converted into one of them... Yet was this pocket dimensional space so mutch different from the rest of the Galaxy.

This unknown element named Magic and a place named Aether of the God's, seem to defy anything in their species archives xxx. This being's proclaiming themself 'God's apparently truly deserved their designation. They are biological in nature, yet they can do think beyond the scientific possible or physical limitations of what should be possible by the definition of reality.
Passiv Indoctrination was not even archived when one of them travels inside it for over a Centurie.
Nazara was not foolish enough to try activ Indoctrination if passiv methods didn't slow any indicators to egfect them. Activ Indoctrination was only a stronger signal without changing anything in the process.

Xxx


So once the game of the gods is over i would than use what happend as a foundation to build side characters for a Mass Effect Saga reimagination.
If some of my story run good enough i might be bold or crazy enough to actually glue them together.

((Possible example but might be discarded))

Marksaline Story becomes the threat the Reapers of Mass Effect try to contain, just like the Forrunners in Halo tried to contain the Flood outbreak...
Meanwhile:
Selene The Crimson RED Changeling Empress, becomes later part of the Mass Effect 1-2-3 game saga.
Hard to scream" op Marry Sue or Gary Stue" if it's:
A: A side / background character for the Mass Effect part...
B: Build up in another good story...

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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