Nov
6th
2021
Prince of Dreams chapter 11 · 2:02pm Nov 6th, 2021
A quick update on Prince of Dreams. I'm now 3000 words into the new chapter and have two more sections to write! This is going to be another big chapter so it taking a little more time.
There is one element in the new chapter I'm not sure is needed. I'm not spoiling anything, but I had a much longer story planned out and during writing, I streamed lined my outline. It's something I want to include and I'm brainstorming how to get it done. You could see some of the old outlines in the earlier chapters, mainly when the High Priestess Bridget offered to teach David what they could. New Outline they won't have time Mah hahaha.
Anyway, that's where I am now on the Prince of Dreams Project.
dont forget that books that work across time and space (like the one that sunset shimmer had) are a thing that nightmare could offer to help him make to keep in contact if you want her to. it was never elaborated what spell or when that idea was made in equestia so it could be a secure connection that the princessess made to allow contact with individuals if you want to try and put some reason for it existing
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It nothing like that. In the original outline Morpheus was going to use witch magic in the climax.
New outline going to involve Nightmare Moon doing something unexpected. So the need to have witch magic isn’t important to the story.
I think I got an idea that works and would help make Morning Dew into an active character in the final event. I want her to be more proactive instead of being a damsel in distress or sidelined.