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Mr Dorito


Anime is Japan's revenge for Hiroshima

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  • 135 weeks
    Title

    So I have a few ideas of what could be better for my RWBY fic

    -Day of Judgement

    -Cursed Remnant

    -Harsh Reality

    -Judgement Comes

    Which title do you guys think is better?

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  • 140 weeks
    Ay bruh

    This Star Wars fanfic gonna be lit. Gonna start it off with a banger.

    1 comments · 247 views
  • 140 weeks
    Narcolepsy

    Fairly certain I have narcolepsy after having my first sleep paralysis moment. Evident with my constant need to sleep every day when the sun is up.

    Probably should’ve disclosed it earlier. It wasn’t just school and jobs that hindered updating my fics, but also I’m constantly void of energy and having the desire to sleep.

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    2 comments · 203 views
  • 141 weeks
    Fanfiction

    Need your opinions on this. It’s clear the idea of Soldier of Three Armies wasn’t suited for a crossover. In fact, making it a crossover with MLP made it worse in my opinion.

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    11 comments · 414 views
  • 142 weeks
    Theme for General Hassan Alraml

    The true heir to the throne of Vacuo, the man who destroyed the Atlesian 6th Army, the Guardian of Vacuo and the Bane of Atlas

    Putting this here because I have a bad habit of forgetting things. Yes that includes writing down notes for ideas for my RWBY fanfic. The song’s just so fucking good.

    6 comments · 152 views
Aug
14th
2021

Fanfiction · 1:10am Aug 14th, 2021

Need your opinions on this. It’s clear the idea of Soldier of Three Armies wasn’t suited for a crossover. In fact, making it a crossover with MLP made it worse in my opinion.

That being said, should I make a Fanfiction story with the same premise? No MLP, still have an Imperial faction led by Thrawn scheming against Palpatine, a stronger Rebel Alliance, Imperial Civil War, no Valkorion, and no Yuuzhan Vong/Grysks.

Let me know what you think. I was thinking the story starts with SCAR Squad and a scientific team under Thrawn’s command discovering Darth Malgus’ body frozen in carbonite and he ends up being the Darth Vader for Thrawn.

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Comments ( 11 )

Id read this, so i say go for it. Where would you post it?

The crossover was what appealed to me, so not sure I'd be as interested if it didn't have it.

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Sorry to hear, but the idea was never meant to be a crossover. I wrote it because I thought it was possible, but the more I wrote, the more I realized I’m diverging from the original idea. Valkorion was never suppose to be there. The Songsteel sword with Darth Vectivus and Traya weren’t suppose to be there. Outside forces weren’t suppose to be involved. The Citadel wasn’t suppose to happen.

Really I’m betraying myself by straying from my vision, so I decided when I have time, I need to get back on track.

you have an interesting take and the SW universe and Twilight looking at it. please doin't abandoned it. maybe refocus on what the core story is.

I'd still read it. But the crossover with Twilight and Spike was nice. You could keep the Twilight and Spike banished idea, just make it so they magically left a normal Equestria. One that has no idea of/or Is even in the same reality as that of the story. Either way I'll read it as I enjoy your works, and was most disheartened by the cancellation of it and PBM,WIM.

I do like this story. It is fun to read as well as enthralling. I like alternate universe stories with different takes on the characters personalities.

I really enjoyed the story but mostly for the Imperial content. I would love to see this continued whether it be restarted and retried on Fanfiction.com or more of the current story added.

Possible for the Reedit of the story or new version.

Please keep Twilight and Spike in the story

Sounds good though Im iffy on the Darth Malgus bit it feels like it would undermine the ‘normal people telling the force to screw off” impression the original had

So did you already start remaking this? If so what's it called so I can find it and read it.

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