Aug
12th
2021
Rewrite Idea - Thomas’s First Father · 7:22pm Aug 12th, 2021
I was wondering if I could rewrite some chapters of the first “A Place in Equestria” and maybe let Thomas have an abusive father named Randy Mercer, and maybe kill his mother like how David Banner did in the Hulk 2003 movie, and have him hate his son for loving his mother so much.
It it’s alright with you, I’ll also make it take place during the Crystalling and maybe save Sombra for another part of the franchise.
This is who I thought about the character:
I think that is a excellent idea!
are going to rewrite it separately or edit the story?
5567641
Edit the entire story
Is the story still gonna take place during the end of Season 4 but after the three episodes of Season 5?
5567781
I’m actually rewriting the Season 6 premiere chapters and where Starlight babysits her nephew and Sunburst
5567782
So him trying to help Starlight is not gonna happen now?
5567783
No he’s still going to help.
5567788
So let me get this straight, I know you said that you’re editing the entire story, but you’re only editing the beginning of Season 6. Am I correct?
What about Princess Amore though?
5567872
I probably might add her and Radiant Hope in the King Sombra fanfic
5567830
Yes
Are you editing 'A Place in Equestria' when you have time?
5575156
If I’m interested.
5575159
That's good, I've noticed some edits.
This guy is somewhat similar to James Mason from 'A New Home' by APoeticHeart.
5575162
I know.
It's fine with me. Probably good to be close to canonical anyways.
Do you still intend to go through with this idea?
5575998
Yes, but not now