I need criticism · 10:25pm Apr 21st, 2021
I am in need of critism to improve the story. The Young Nightmare. Hold nothing back.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/492144/the-young-nightmare
Just a brony looking for a way to create work for others to see. here you will find stories that are mostly similar to each other, as most of them will be alternate timelines.
I am in need of critism to improve the story. The Young Nightmare. Hold nothing back.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/492144/the-young-nightmare