Dec
9th
2020
Newest chapter · 8:06am Dec 9th, 2020
WARNING SLIGHT SPOILERS AHEAD
This is for those who read the new chapter. Should I rewrite it in a less sexual way because honestly I was always gonna turn barb into a ho. Just gonna wait till ponies left and then do it. My plan from the beginning was for Jekyll to get darker and darker as he uses his dark magic to infuse his armor With dark magic and power it. I am honestly a fan of the fall of equestria thing but not to the extent the normal foe goes with mares being nothing more than animals. So if y’all are gonna jump ship go ahead because Jekyll is going on a power trip.
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Rewrite or no
NO
5412357
Oh thank god. I don’t want to re do it cause I wanna make a badass character not evil but far from good
5412358
So chaotic good then
5412360
Sumthin like that
I think I know where you're going with this and because of that, you should keep that chapter how it is. it shows to Equestria who is the new king and what there going up agents. it shows the princesses that he is no laughing matter and you should consider EVERYTHING before trying to do anything agents him.
the only complaint I have is you could have nicer to barb she was only doing what Jekyll said with the 'tell me how equestrians view [Blank]'. it's not like she is the one who implanted those views. she is only doing what she was taught and what he said. or you could have twisted his words and told the mane 6 in a better way without lying like "She's going to be a bridge of equestrian upbringing and my kingdomes teaching for all the world to see" by saying something like that you can make them both less angry at Jekyll and make them wonder what is the kingdom is going to be teaching. also might make twilight more suspicious because she might be able to see that it has more than one meaning. it makes him seem like more of a cunning and mysterious foe than a cruel and blunt foe
p.s. love what you did to shinning, fucking hilarious.
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Thanks for the ideas it's too late for Barb to be normal but I'm planning on having her be a big part of the relations between Equestria and the kingdom. I don't quite know what I'm going to do yet but she will be useful in one way or another. Also, what do you think of the crystalmorphs?
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I find them good for security, espionage, and anything involving stealth. if you're going for the cruel and evil vibe then they would be a perfect fit.
btw I never saw the movie so I'm going on what I heard/read which isn't a lot.
5412757
Do you know what xenomorphs look like
5412813
Yes