Mary Sue Test-Melody · 9:07pm Nov 25th, 2020
Welp, I probably messed this up. Here's the original.
( ) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
(x) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
( ) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
( ) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
( ) Your OC has changed species.
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.
( ) Your OC has
( ) Your OC's name is an anagram.
( ) Your OC's cutie mark has something to do with the elements of harmony.
( ) Your OC has their own version of the elements of harmony.
( ) Does your OC have multi-colored eyes?
( ) Are they taller than big Macintosh?
( ) Are they in a romantic relationship with a canon character?
( ) Are they in a romantic relationship with one of the mane-six?
( ) Are they in a romantic relationship with royalty?
( ) Are they royalty?
( ) Do they have more than two colors in their mane?
( ) Does their tail have more colors than their mane?
( ) Gradient on their legs/wings/face?
( ) Are they enemies with Chrysalis/Tirek/Etc? (Add an extra point for every canon villain)
(x) Is your OC friends with one of the mane six? (Add an extra point for every extra character)-Rainbow Dash
(x) Your OC has used Rainbow Power/The Elements of Harmony/Strong Magic
( ) Your OC's Coat is Black
( ) Your OC has black and red in their design.
( ) Your OC has more than three major virtues/vices.
( ) Your OC has powers from an alternative franchise/crossover
( ) Your OC has encountered a non-revamped generation 1 character.
( ) Your OC is adored by all they meet.
( ) Your OC is hated by everyone.
( ) Except one?
( ) Do they have a similar/same mane to a character from the show.
( ) Your OC is a shipping baby (it is the child of either a canonxcanon ship or CanonxOC ship)
Total: 3, I think
For this part, subtract 1 point from your previous total for every "X".
( ) Your OC is an alcoholic.
( ) Your OC is an Earth Pony.
( ) Your OC is selfish.
( ) Your OC is a smoker.
( ) Your OC has a severe flaw that has hindered them (Specify, Subtract 5 points)- I mean, she has flaws (like possible depression and sometimes wanting to commit self-harm) but she never lets her friends see them, so they don't exactly "hinder" anything
( ) Your OC's cutie mark is something lame (like washing cars or something, Subtract 3 points)
( ) Your OC's only picture is via character generator (Subtract 3 points)
Grand Total: Still 3 I think
1-9: Your OC is safe, relatively unique but not over the top.
10-19: Your OC is Moderate, but a little out of Show-Canon.
20-29: Your OC is a bit Mary-Sueish, you may want to revise some of their capabilities.
30-36: Your OC is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you really should revise their capabilities.
36+: Your OC is an extreme Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you NEED to revise this character.
Welp, just like Bez, a 3 and not a Mary Sue. Yay!
Yay..
5404952
Yep
Great job!
5404956
Heh, thanks
5404954
Surprisingly, the test said nothing about crazy powers
5404958
‘Course
5404959
I was gonna ask about that. I was wondering why it didn’t mention crazy powers
5404959
Yeah, that was weird
5404961
What about the gradient on the wings thing?
5404963
Well, the wings only glow purple when Melody uses her magic, they aren't permanently gradient
5404970
Thanks
Holly, is it this complicated to be a Mare Sue? I haven't seen such long post before.
5405013
Well, I put a link to the original source in the blog, it's where I got all of that
5405014
Im not even sure I have an OC, I mean I did make up some own original characters to my Hunbrony stories, but I dont have OC that I made for myself. Should I?
5405235
It's your choice
Oml I’m a 4 despite reds demons and stuff he’s a 4 lol
5437473
Ah
5437476
Wait he’s a 3 mis counted the 2 colours coat as 1 point
5437480
Ah