Mary Sue Test: Hero · 8:59pm Nov 25th, 2020

( ) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
( ) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
(X) Your OC uses a form of dark magic. (If you count the element of darkness)
( ) Your OC has changed species.
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
(X) Your OC contains neon colors. (his ‘elemental state’ glows white, not sure if that counts)
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.
( ) Your OC has rainbow colors.
( ) Your OC's name is an anagram.
( ) Your OC's cutie mark has something to do with the elements of harmony.
(X) Your OC has their own version of the elements of harmony. (do the main elements, fire, ice, lighting, earth, ice, and grass/nature or whatever, count?)
() Does your OC have multi-colored eyes?
(X) Are they taller than big Macintosh? (he has a form that makes him slightly taller than Big Mac)
() Are they in a romantic relationship with a canon character?
() Are they in a romantic relationship with one of the mane-six?
() Are they in a romantic relationship with royalty?
(X) Are they royalty? (Maybe? He is Thorax’s soon to be adopted nephew, and Pharynx’s soon to be adopted son)
( ) Do they have more than two colors in their mane?
( ) Does their tail have more colors than their mane?
( ) Gradient on their legs/wings/face?
( ) Are they enemies with Chrysalis/Tirek/Etc? (Add an extra point for every canon villain)
( ) Is your OC friends with one of the mane six? (Add an extra point for every extra character)
( ) Your OC has used Rainbow Power/The Elements of Harmony/Strong Magic
(X) Your OC's Coat is Black
( ) Your OC has black and red in their design.
( ) Your OC has more than three major virtues/vices.
( ) Your OC has powers from an alternative franchise/crossover
( ) Your OC has encountered a non-revamped generation 1 character.
( ) Your OC is adored by all they meet.
( ) Your OC is hated by everyone.
( ) Except one?
( ) Do they have a similar/same mane to a character from the show.
( ) Your OC is a shipping baby (it is the child of either a canonxcanon ship or CanonxOC ship)

Total: 6

For this part, subtract 1 point from your previous total for every "X".
( ) Your OC is an alcoholic.
( ) Your OC is an Earth Pony.
( ) Your OC is selfish.
( ) Your OC is a smoker.
(X) Your OC has a severe flaw that has hindered them (Does depression/inner conflict/losing birth parents count?)
( ) Your OC's cutie mark is something lame
( ) Your OC's only picture is via character generator

Grand Total: 1

1-9: Your OC is safe, relatively unique but not over the top.
10-19: Your OC is Moderate, but a little out of Show-Canon.
20-29: Your OC is a bit Mary-Sueish, you may want to revise some of their capabilities.
30-36: Your OC is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you really should revise their capabilities.
36+: Your OC is an extreme Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you NEED to revise this character.

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