Part Eleven Edit, Plus General Update

Salvete,

It's been a while since my last post, from April to now. I have a few things to update everyone on.

First, I was rereading Part Eleven to refresh myself for finishing Part Twelve. I noticed a rather substantial error in the part where Luna teaches Neil to control his dream: when she showed him the apple he gave her during their first meeting?

Well, she called it a zap apple. This is wrong. It was a normal apple, and a normal dead tree, as Neil didn't know what a zap apple was when he offered it to her. I apologize for this mistake, especially as its correction took this long.

I changed the paragraph: “This boon thou offered me before certainly fits the custom. Judging by thy indifferent expression, thou dost not know the significance of this gift. Understand, Neil, this apple came from the Zap Apple tree yonder. Behold, 'tis not Zap Apple season; the tree lies cold. Yet, I hold its fruit."

To this: “This boon thou offered me before certainly fits the custom. Judging by thy indifferent expression, thou dost not know the significance of this gift. Understand, this apple came from a dead tree."

Much better, eh?

Second, as for Part Twelve, I plan on publishing it before Christmas. Everything is going well. I hope things on your end are going well too.

That is all.

Valete.

Comments

[Celysus]

I'm very excited! Thank you so much for the update, I look forward to reading the next chapter :D