The Sun Never Sets Changelog- Post Chapter 19 · 8:17pm Sep 21st, 2020
Here's the next list of updates I've made to the story prior to publishing Chapter 20.
SNS was largely I thing I wrote chapter by chapter in the beginning, but now that it's tripled in expected length I want to take the time to polish everything. After the last chapter is published, I'll go back and make sure everything is how I want it before finally stamping the project finished. This changelog isn't as detailed, so there may be a few more points added to it if I catch anything major in the following days.
Chapter 00
- The descriptor of Sunset's sword is changed from 'greatsword' to 'claymore', because I'm a historical arms nerd.
Chapter 01
-The chapter name, as well as Twilight's title, has changed to The Dark Disciple. The four opening chapters are intended to be titles for the main cast, and I felt The Student of Celestia could've applied to Twilight or Sunset.
Chapter 18
-Fixed grammar/spelling errors, also clarified several actions within the fight sequence.
Chapter 19
-Changed formatting slightly.
The side stories will also be getting revisions.
Different Flavors
-Changed a paragraph describing their demon powers to describe the setting better.
Maybe we'll get SNS Special Edition after all of this is said and done.
