• Member Since 5th Aug, 2015
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Kalushar


"Never think you won't make it. If you believe, you'll succeed."

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  • 182 weeks
    Beyond the Vail

    Yup, ive got a new story out and just like my other it involves humans, though in a vastly different way.
    Beyond the Vail is about a guy named Jacob who inherits a house and an interesting collection from his great-aunt, among these is an odd statuette of a black alicorn....
    Nope! No spoilers here! Go read the story!

    1 comments · 136 views
  • 188 weeks
    My story

    What's your guys' opinion of how Reliquiae is going?

    2 comments · 119 views
  • 239 weeks
    Huh guess I’m back now

    Ignore that first post, this is where things truly begin.

    0 comments · 144 views
  • 456 weeks
    hello!

    hello i'm starting this so u can give me chapter and story ideas i'm sorry for typos point them out ill fix them (the keys e and k and v stick sorry) leave your comments i appreciate them thanks until next time brohoof :derpytongue2:

    0 comments · 188 views
Sep
18th
2020

My story · 12:26pm Sep 18th, 2020

What's your guys' opinion of how Reliquiae is going?

Report Kalushar · 119 views · Story: Reliquiae: After Earth ·
Comments ( 2 )

You really need to work on structure. Organize your dialogue into separate paragraphs, it's rarely clear who's speaking.

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Thanks for the advice. I agree.

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