Literally a guy who likes games and tv. I write Dystopia/Dark Scenarios.
The title says it all, I am not really liking the most recent chapters (despite multiple rewrites), and I am looking for ideas on how to improve the story going forward. Any and all ideas are welcome.
I will accept all suggestions from every chapter, not just the one I just posted.
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Hmm... Maybe add more mystery elements to story?
Haven't read new chapter but right now maybe to go back to flurry again for us to see how that side of the story is going
More scp that the foundation can use, it's been thousands of years some of those must have been tamebel to be used to help them like have some scp in the MTF
Maybe more back stories, recordings or messages left behind and maybe some bitter sweet or tragic moments of Humanity fighting a losing battle and old ruins of cities to go with them that are possibly being preserved by anomalous means. It would help the Ponies to truly understand why the Foundation does what they do...
Look, I just like it when Ponies show empathy to Humanity because of what they went through.