Aug
13th
2020
Big McThankies from McSpankies! · 11:42pm Aug 13th, 2020
Woooooo, two updates right off the bat with a third on the way! The awkward stilted balance between dialogues and actions is honestly my main problem with the story so far, but I've gotten the basic exposition for the first part of Lunar Plight out of the way.
Next chapter breaks away from all of that and does some actual character building instead. I'm gonna take my time going over it as well, that way it's not nearly as rushed or unpolished. Big thanks to all 190 (and counting) of you who decided to give my story, of all things, the time of day!
