"I mean I AM an astrologist, but I work as a barista on the side. Cup of joe for the road?" -Comet Flare
So I'm having a touch of trouble.
A character I'm really hyped for has been planned for the story from the start, but the reveal and the character are so out of left field that I'm afraid it might scare off readers or seemed shoed in.
I'm trying to figure this out but I'm scratching my head each time I crack open the text file. Any advice?
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Hmmm.. Imo the setting in which the character is revealed counts a little bit. For example on the battlefield they do something to get some attention. But in any case I think a very simple "Hello my name is xxx" should work.
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The thing is, it's a character one of my main protagonists knows but never brought up. In any case I think I'll be reworking this next chapter and cutting them out for a bit.