SMG (art display)

This is my latest drawing, practicing with prima color pencils and also trying to make scenes. I first posted this on art for fanfiction group. There I got some good feedback on it, so I made some touch ups on this one.

It's brighter than it should because of my shitty phone, sadly, but I still reduced the lighting on my room to take another picture. It made it slightly better than the original post, the difference isn't much.

I retouched the trees. They were super shiny and didn't have any texture making them look like steel pipes.

Gallus arm was lacking the correct perspective and shading. I did some retouch to it, but this one prove difficult to fix since it had to be done in the early stage of the drawing. Still I did the best I could and in my eyes it look a lot better. In my next drawing I'll keep that in mind.

Also if by any chance ur reading this, I would appreciate some feed backs on it.