Chapter 4 progress · 6:03am Mar 16th, 2020
Just to let you know I hope Chapter 4 comes out a little sooner then the last one. I've had a lot of fun writing the rough draft. once I finish going over it again for a final draft I'll get it to my publisher. but for a little taste here's an unedited scene for you as a teaser.
“Get back here you little three tailed pain in the ass!” An angry female voice called out. The image of a half sized Kohaku, laughing aloud came running out of a door with a flame on it with a towel griped in his tails. Followed quickly by a dripping wet fire red vixen with four tails on hot pursuit. A vixen she assumed was his elder sister.
Sweetie Belle watched as the pair climbed over every cushion in a desperate game of cat and mouse. Finally Kohaku had slipped on a loose tassel and fell onto his back. His elder sister then leaped atop of him and started to tickle him repeatedly.
“Steal my towel will you, you little rascal.” She said. Her paws brushing over every ticklish spot making the young boy laugh harder and harder until tears fell from his eyes. A devilish grin on the vixen’s face as her eyes laughed along, filled with a sisterly love.
Moving a bit she saw the image vanish leaving her alone yet again. The scene she just saw made her heart ache harder then she ever thought it could. She missed her sister, a tear fell down her cheeks. “Oh Rarity… I miss you sis.”