Chapter 17: Aftermath Of The Formal

Hey guys! So It’s been a while since I’ve blogged! Anyway, I was just wondering, I nearly have Chapter 17 done and could possibly have it published today. All I need to do is, read it over again and fix any mistakes. I thought I wasn’t going to be able to finish it but I actually had more time than I thought. (Even though I have work to do, am avoiding it) besides that, I wanted to ask if you want it published today? I can get published in a few hours after fixing everything or I can publish it next weekend along with chapter 18 if I have that done.

Disclaimer: previous like the last chapter, they are mentions of suicidal thoughts and self harm. it’s not too dark but it is heavy. This chapter is pretty emotional for Sunset, and also for Luna. You will see what I mean when it’s published.

Comments

[principessaluna]

Argh I'd love it if you could publish it today, I'm so inpatient when it comes to things like that :')

[Sunlight Rays]

I would like to see the new chapter today, but if you wish to publish it later for better quality, then I can wait. Quality over quantity, you know. ;)

[Shimmeringsun]

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I can get it published today soon! Just re-reading over it just now.

[Sunlight Rays]

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That's good news! Also, a piece of advice: try to get an editor who can point out the grammatical errors. That way, it'll be much smoother for the readers to read through your story. If it is hard for you to get an editor, I suggest using Grammarly. You can use the demo version for free, and while it doesn't fix advanced grammatical errors unless you purchase the premium version, it does indeed help immensely when catching out basic grammatical errors or typos. So, if you're willing to, I suggest giving it a shot. :)

P.S. Do not use it on Google Docs, however; it's still in Beta and the accuracy of the Google Docs version is horrible. I've been using it for half a year now and I get pissed off when it points out nonexisting grammatical errors.

[Shimmeringsun]

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I actually totally forgot that grammarly was even a thing! I never thought of that. Thank you!! That will actually help a lot, I do tend to miss a lot grammar mistakes.

[Sunlight Rays]

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You're welcome! It's the least I could do for you and the story

[Babroniedad]

I'm going to read it either way.
But if you're ready always happy to read now vs. later.

[Shimmeringsun]

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It’s published!

[Babroniedad]

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... and I am reading it right now.

[Babroniedad]

Wow.
Oh Sunset.