Re: Chapter 17 · 6:21pm Nov 19th, 2019
No, I hadn’t forgotten, but I have some explaining to do regardless.
As you remember, back at the start of the month, I released an update saying the chapter was finished and awaiting approval. Not too long after that post went up, I got word back from Shachza. Long and short of it was that things came off too rushed and not everything that happened in the chapter felt that it had a proper build-up. For that reason, I spent the last few weeks alternating between playing Digimon Story: Cyber Sleuth Complete on my Switch, rewriting and expanding parts of the chapter, and then playing Pokemon Shield.
Finally got around to finishing the bits that I needed to change or expand today, and now the chapter is up to over 8k words. I feel now that it has the proper build-up for this whopper of a story-arc ending. I’ll be going to work on an interlude chapter meant to fill the gaps between the two story arcs. But in the meantime, I’d like to get it edited. I’ll be firing off an invite to Shachza, but if you’re interested in lending a hand in editing, lemme know and I’ll shoot you a link.
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