Ok, I'll admit it, my early chapters of Oddworld and Firebreathers are full of errors, run on, missing words, and others. So today I will spend my time fixing them, it will run from chapter 1-10 on oddworld, and chapters 1-6 on Firebreathers, and as I complete each chapter I will rerelease them.
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Are any new chapters coming out?
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Today no but I’ll be reposting the chapter listed above to better match my current writing style so they will be longer.
Does that include the foul language too? Cause, you had points off on Firebreathers due to it.
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Did I really have that much foul language in fire? But yeah I’m going through both stories
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The foul language are the common cuss words, so yes.
5152145
Ok, but remember that Spike is 16 so words like crap are just natural.
True. But, the points are knocked off because the Profanity tag isn't there.
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Ture as well, I might add it because there is going to be a lot more in later chapters, but only limited to crap and similar
Then, I suppose I can restart your points. But, that's the only favor your getting. One misspelled word or incorrect grammar, and you'll have points knocked off. Deal?
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I wouldn’t have it any other way, that’s why I’m going back.
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Good luck, my friend.